Draw My Fursona[s] win RAINBOW MANE!

[van]

win this VERY RARE horseh if you draw one, or both of my fursonas the best. C: ends sometime within a month or two.

I have two Fursonas, Vixen [lineart by spotty, getting better ref later], and Tokumei [art by sketchi]. C:

[Aero<3]

Ill try!..its not gonna be the best but ill try!

[van]

ok! and im sure itll be great! X3

[~SNCastiel<3~]

does it have to be online? or can it be paper and pencil? ^^

[van]

it doesnt matter. =3

[~SNCastiel<3~]

it doesnt matter. =3

yesss!!! finally a contest i can enter! <3

[van]

haha, so i take that as a your entering? XD

[~SNCastiel<3~]

haha, so i take that as a your entering? XD

heck ya!

[~SNCastiel<3~]

okay so the head looks out of proportion but its not! (im just using my web cam for now which screws up proportions....i will get a real scan of it later when i am satisfied with it ^^)

please critique this! i dont care how mean you are i will not take it offensively! dont hold back (im begging i want to win ) so tell what i should im prove to make the best i can!

do you want it colored completely? or is just the 'x' and his eye fine? please tell me anything at all i need to improve ^^

though its kind of a horrible pic so i dot know how well you can even see it xD just try your best to tell me what to fix <3

[van]

i think its wonderful! <3

it would be fine with just the aye and X colored, because black is hard to color and usually ends up ruining the whole picture, XD the only thing i would fix is the head.. it looks a bit small and round at the top.

but thats all, i cant see anything else, its just its all side ways and i im guessing thats the web cam, though XD