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Re: Write a story-win a green toxic <3

Postby Cleary » Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:34 pm

i sent the message of my story threw pm ~bump~
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Re: Write a story-win a green toxic <3

Postby Cleary » Sat Apr 27, 2013 2:55 pm

bump!
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Re: Write a story-win a green toxic <3

Postby Cleary » Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:35 am

C: BUMP!
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Re: Write a story-win a green toxic <3

Postby Cleary » Sun Apr 28, 2013 12:49 pm

BUMP!
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Write A Story. Win A VERY RARE Green Toxic!

Postby Cleary » Sun Apr 28, 2013 1:03 pm

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Re: Write a story-win a green toxic <3

Postby Violet2sweet » Mon Apr 29, 2013 12:08 pm

~A loving toxic pup's adventure~
(LAST EDITED WAS ON MAY 16 NOW COMPLETED)
It was August 2008, the new litters of pets were getting ready to be adopted. The shy little pup named Millie that was a green toxic dog opened her eyes to the world. As the gates of the adoption center opened everyone rushed in. It was like everything went by so fast next thing she knew she was adopted. She was taken home by a nice owner. She said she planned to collect all the pets on ChickenSmoothie. "Who are you? I'm Bubbles!". Millie turned around to see a blue toxic with sparkly eyes. "I'm Millie!" she replied. "Nice to meet you!". They both became close friends and soon they were old enough to walk out of their blanket. After a few days Millie noticed her owner not coming on anymore. She stopped the daily visits and after 1 year she came back. Millie was wagging her tail with excitement only to find out...she is giving her pets away! Millie's smile faded away as she found the news.

Her owner donated her pets to the pound. Millie was scared to see all these pets locked in cages, dogs barking, cats clawing at the cages, and horses going wild. "W-w-what is this place?" said Millie. The adoption lady at the counter said "Its the pound..its where unwanted or abandoned pets go". Millie was scared and nervous as she was in this place. After 2 days the pound opened. Hands grabbed a pet randomly. Millie turned left and right as she saw the number of pets decreasing. Millie soon yelped as she was grabbed. Her owner said "I wasted my pound turn for THIS?" she said in disgust. Millie was offended and almost cried. Her owner then threw her into a box labeled "Unwanted pets PLEASE trade". Millie was upset and she didn't like her new owner. She decided to look at the other boxes and explore her home even if she wasen't allowed to. Her eyes went wide as she saw Bubbles in the "Favorites" box. "MILLIE! Is that you!?" said Bubbles. They ran to each other and hugged and cried a bit. "I thought you were gone forever!" Millie said. "Well at least we got the same owner!" said Bubbles. Speaking of her owner, she was near the corner and saw them togethor.

"BUBBLES! WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH THAT! YOUR MUCH BETTER TO BE AROUND THOSE KINDS OF PETS!" she said in a loud voice. Bubbles then was dragged by the ear and thrown back into the room. Bubbles' ear was hurting and she yelped at the pain. After a few hours someone traded for Millie, Bubbles, and a bunch of other pets. The owner traded an overtrade and the mean owner declined saying "Its not fair you should probably offer 2x it because its worth more" she lied. The nice owner reported her and she was warned. She was super mad but she decided to do the trade asking for 2 more pets even though it was an overtrade as it was. She accepted because she loved the pets with all her heart. She toke them home and put all of them in "Favorites". Millie and Bubbles were togethor! They played togethor and had much fun at her new owner's place. There was always new friends and happiness. Untill...her owner had gotten into a car accident and her sister gotten the pets. She decided to give away 150 out of 200 pets away. She did a giveaway and Millie and Bubbles were the first prize and they went to a winner. Accidently, the winner deleted Bubbles and Millie gasped in horror. Millie was taken to "favorites" but she cried for Bubbles was gone!

She felt like nothing mattered. She had lost her best friend. She wouldn't even eat anymore. Her owner was concerned and had taken her to the vet. She was forced fed by her owner since she loved her so much and didn't want her to die. Eventually Millie had a talk with her owner. "Millie...please eat.." her owner said. "I don't want to...life is worthless" she said as she pushed the dog bowl away sobbing. Its been a year since the incident. "Millie...Bubbles would want you to move on she would want you to be happy....do it for Bubbles..." she said. Millie looked at her reflection in the mirror after she skipped dinner. She saw her bones a bit and how skinny she was. "Maybe I should be happy...for Bubbles". She then made new friends at her school and she smiled for the first time in a year. "Maybe she was right, I should move on...but...Bubbles will always be in my memories.." She looked at the picture of her and Bubbles and put it down on the counter. She ran outside to play and she felt like she could see Bubbles' sparkly eyes in the sunset for a moment.

The end :)!
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Re: Write a story-win a green toxic <3

Postby Patrick Stump » Mon Apr 29, 2013 12:30 pm

Jasmines Adventure


"Hey dumb face" a rude sunjewel yelled to Jasmine , the weak and young toxic pup.
"I hate it here" she though.
"So many bullies in the pound centre"
"Hey dumb face , listen up. And listen good. If you eat from my bowl again...You do NOT want to know what will happen to your ugly little face" the sunjewel snarled at Jasmine.
"Got it? I said... GOT IT???"
"Ok.." Jasmine said shyly. "I promise I won't eat your kibble anymore".
Then Jasmine took off. She ran into a corner , a small lonely corner. There she lay.. She suddenly started dozing off... She suddenly woke up with a shake. The loud speakers were saying " POUND OPEN IN 3 MINUTES! PLACES EVERYONE!!!". Jasmine dashed into the adoption room desperately trying to find a spot to sit. She knew she HAD to get adopted.
"Oh no! I can't see any spots left" She thought.
Suddenly she heard a kind voice yell out "Hey toxic , come over here!" Jasmine turned and saw a target dog. She ran over to him , wondering why she was being called over.
"I saved a spot for you. You deserve to be adopted."
said the kind target dog. The pound doors jerked open as tiny litte hands snatched each and every very rare they could find. Jasmine ran from them all. Finally there was only the most recent 2013 pets left. There she lay. Suddenly a person spied her. They ran towards her and picked her up. When they got to her pets group the person bought tons of cute doggy clothes for her.
"These clothes are too tight..." though Jasmine itching her fur.
"Too much cotton.. WAY too much cotton"
As december 18th came along Jasmines owner though she would try something. Try cheating for more rares. Jasmine knew it was wrong , but couldn't communicate with the owners. As the time came for the new December 18th pets to be adopted Jasmine's owner used 5 extra accounts. She got a rose pup , sun pup a UR tiger dog a banana and TONS of other great pets. About a week later Jasmines owner got banned. Jasmine was trapped in the horrifying cheaters pet group!!
Just then Avian came into the pet group.
"Want to come live with tess and I?" Avian asked
"Sure! I don't like it here" replied Jasmine
Avian grabbed Jasmines paw and walked her to Tess's pet group. There was tons of Zebras and other toxics , just like her!
Tess was a WAY better owner than her old owner. Now Jasmine actually had clothes that fit.
2 years later
"Aww great. Im at the pound AGAIN. I knew I shouldn't have left Tess's pet group.." grumbled Jasmine.
The doors opened again as people started snatching every pet..And then Jasmine heard a BANG and a CRASH...
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Re: Write a story-win a green toxic <3

Postby panache » Sat May 04, 2013 9:52 am

I'm withdrawing... Sorry >.< I've been having a lot of tests lately and I'm traveling pretty soon, so I don't have time to write something. I wish I could. ;_;

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building from nothing ← wip

Postby pep » Sat May 04, 2013 11:13 am


























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➸ toxic ;; keaton ♂
➸ wooden puppet dog ;; harper ♂


BUILDING FROM NOTHING.
by ciel & sebastian.

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prologue.


    Keaton was only five months old when it happened.
    His father was brutally murderered as he was walking home from work. The man was a successful individual, and raised Keaton as a single father when Keaton's mother left them for a richer man who promised her all the diamonds she could ever possess. Then there was Keaton's father: a gentle man with more heart than money could ever buy.
    It was getting late. The skies were starting to dim, the clouds darkening from their white, puffy goodness into dark sheets that began expanding across the sky like a blanket. There was a large chance of rain, and no one doubted that it was coming. At around nine o'clock PM, Keaton decided he'd better go look for his father, who was usually home from work at six o'clock. The green toxic pup threw the door open, his black rain poncho hanging loosely on him, as it was a little too large, but the small family of two worked with anything they could, as funds were getting extremely low. The pitter-patter of the rain beginning to fall was frequent, and he could hear the chirping of locusts die down slightly, replaced with the sound of the light drizzling.
    "Papa?" the pup called out, his footsteps loud on the sidewalk.
    As he ran along, he could see lights on inside, the other citizens having gone inside for the day to let the rain fall without being caught in it. Keaton, personally, loved the rain. It made him feel free and safe. And the smell after the rain was comforting to him.

    - huge wip -
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Re: Write a story-win a green toxic <3

Postby S~B » Sat May 04, 2013 9:51 pm

I finished my story but I posted it on a seperate thread, so here it is=
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1782334&p=55192977#p55192977
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