Creature feature/Creature cats Fanclub~

[mrose]

I'll think about that. For now, I'll start on chapter two.

[Kodak-Problem?]

Okay,I Look forward to reading it.

[mrose]

Okay, I need your opinions. I personally really dislike where the story is going, but I have no idea what else to do.

“A girl? What are you talking about?” Dan said as he made his way towards my room. He nearly jumped when he saw me. There was a very awkward moment of silence until Dan broke it. “Who are you?” I just blurted out the first thing that I thought of; “It’s me, Max, but I turned into a girl.” Which was, by far, the stupidest thing I could’ve said.

If one of my friends said that they turned into a girl, I would’ve laughed. Their reaction, however, was much different than what mine would’ve been. “Are you kidding me?” James replied.

(I would've put what James usually says instead of kidding, but CS wouldn't like that cause it's swearing and all.)

[Kodak-Problem?]

How about a secret book or a diary, telling how the curse works..uh i can't really think right now it's morning,lol.

[mrose]

...That sounds cool.

EditEdit: I removed the last edit. Anyways, here's the next chapter; http://fuzzyblink.deviantart.com/#/d4qdiib I didn't want to upload it, and I'm not too proud of it, but a lot of people (or at least, 5 or 6 people) on DA wanted it.

[Munin]

...That sounds cool.

EditEdit: I removed the last edit. Anyways, here's the next chapter; http://fuzzyblink.deviantart.com/#/d4qdiib I didn't want to upload it, and I'm not too proud of it, but a lot of people (or at least, 5 or 6 people) on DA wanted it.

I gotta kind of stupid idea but:
Jordan walked into the room where all the creatures were talking about something. He stared at the group for a moment before shaking his head and realizing what was happening. " What the brown?" He asked, seeing that a girl was in the room. " That (what nova calls seamus when he has the peach skin XD) is Gassy." James replied. " Apparently I don't follow Max news." Jordan said, not believing what James had said. " HEY! IT'S (insert bad word...) TRUE!" Seamus yelled at Jordan, putting his arms out wide. " Wait, how can we really test if you are Max?" Jordan asked, walking up to the girl.

And that's all I got X3

[mrose]

...That sounds cool.

EditEdit: I removed the last edit. Anyways, here's the next chapter; http://fuzzyblink.deviantart.com/#/d4qdiib I didn't want to upload it, and I'm not too proud of it, but a lot of people (or at least, 5 or 6 people) on DA wanted it.

I gotta kind of stupid idea but:
Jordan walked into the room where all the creatures were talking about something. He stared at the group for a moment before shaking his head and realizing what was happening. " What the brown?" He asked, seeing that a girl was in the room. " That (what nova calls seamus when he has the peach skin XD) is Gassy." James replied. " Apparently I don't follow Max news." Jordan said, not believing what James had said. " HEY! IT'S (insert bad word...) TRUE!" Seamus yelled at Jordan, putting his arms out wide. " Wait, how can we really test if you are Max?" Jordan asked, walking up to the girl.

And that's all I got X3

Wait, should I use that exact text or put it into my own words? I would give credit if I used the text, of course, but just wondering~
Edit:I mean, if I were to use the idea. (Which I will.)
Editedit: Oh, it's in third person, so I guess I'll have to edit it anyways~ (But it's not your fault that its in third person. It's Girlymexican's fault OBVIOUSLY.)

[Munin]

...That sounds cool.

EditEdit: I removed the last edit. Anyways, here's the next chapter; http://fuzzyblink.deviantart.com/#/d4qdiib I didn't want to upload it, and I'm not too proud of it, but a lot of people (or at least, 5 or 6 people) on DA wanted it.

I gotta kind of stupid idea but:
Jordan walked into the room where all the creatures were talking about something. He stared at the group for a moment before shaking his head and realizing what was happening. " What the brown?" He asked, seeing that a girl was in the room. " That (what nova calls seamus when he has the peach skin XD) is Gassy." James replied. " Apparently I don't follow Max news." Jordan said, not believing what James had said. " HEY! IT'S (insert bad word...) TRUE!" Seamus yelled at Jordan, putting his arms out wide. " Wait, how can we really test if you are Max?" Jordan asked, walking up to the girl.

And that's all I got X3

Wait, should I use that exact text or put it into my own words? I would give credit if I used the text, of course, but just wondering~
Edit:I mean, if I were to use the idea. (Which I will.)
Editedit: Oh, it's in third person, so I guess I'll have to edit it anyways~ (But it's not your fault that its in third person. It's Girlymexican's fault OBVIOUSLY.)

Meh, I don't really care. lol I forgot that it was in first person. I never write in first person so, I would suck at it X3 I honesty don't mind what you do with it. If you wanna change it go for it. Its your story(well actually its kinda the creatures' but mostly yours ^^) so your choice.

[mrose]

Yay~
Anyways, so I'm gonna try to involve you guys a lot, because it would be more fun that way. And because I'm too lazy to think of my own ideas. So, should Gassy/Max/Girly

A. Do a totally awesome impression of his godly voice. (Cause you know, he's a girl now, and he doesn't have a awesome voice anymore, so he could only do a impression of it. I dunno what I was thinking when I thought of this one.)

or B. Something else?

[Munin]

Yay~
Anyways, so I'm gonna try to involve you guys a lot, because it would be more fun that way. And because I'm too lazy to think of my own ideas. So, should Gassy/Max/Girly

A. Do a totally awesome impression of his godly voice. (Cause you know, he's a girl now, and he doesn't have a awesome voice anymore, so he could only do a impression of it. I dunno what I was thinking when I thought of this one.)

or B. Something else?

Well... Max could try to do an impression and then he fails. Then he says something that only some people know of the creatures...