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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Temperance. » Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:29 pm

Clowesia wrote:
/PULLSHAIROUT.
I keep writing MASSIVE RP replies. Dx
Like I just wrote nine medium-thick paragraphs when the norm is like four smallish ones.
I AM HORRIBLE.
I THINK I JUST BLATHER ON.
Why must I do thiiiiiiiis.

Maybe I should start RPing at a higher level again. xD
Can anyone here write about 8 paragraphs relatively easily? ouo



[Generally depends on what I'm given to work with, obviously, but generally yes. Of course, as far as roleplaying goes I haven't usually posted that much, that's mainly due to the fact that people don't read it fully and then reply with all kinds of discrepancies, which annoys me since then I have to correct them and I feel like a nit-picker XD]


























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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby my Lalia » Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:12 pm

Form:
Username:
my Lalia
Favorite type of RP:
fantasy with some realism
Sample of writing:
my Lalia wrote:
Kassie felt the chill of the air as they neared the Palace, it was warm down by the river she live near but the Palace was said to be cold and dark. She had no idea why it was so cold and why the Royals live there, but it was said that the Royals had the power of the water and Wind elements so she guessed it had something to do with that. She looked at the man that took her from her home and family and wondered if any of his family or friends were taken to be a bride of one of the Drakken Nobles. She flinch slightly when he looked up at her with cold eyes, "You stare too much, you must learn not to stare at your new husband. He might hit you for being rude." He said in a cld monotone voice, Kassie bit her lip and looked away though she heard slight chuckling from the man. "Do you enjoy your work?" She asked without thinking and felt his eyes burn into her which caused her body to heat up, she looked at the man to see that his eyes were red which ment he had the power of the element fire. "Do not speak out of term, I do this job because I have to. If I like it or not is none of your business!" He said as the cairrage stopped, he was out of the door in an instant and let the guards help her out. Kassie was close to tears as the man truely scared her which meant that who ever she was given to would be ten times more frightening. The guards ushered her through the palace until they came to a bright red door, Kassie looked up at the guard that opened it for her. "You will stay here until the other females arrive then you will be taken to the Thrown room." Said one of the guards, he had a really deep voice that nearly comforted Kassie but that comfort was gone once the door behind her shut. Kassie bit her lip as tears threatened to over flow, she went and sat on one of the many cushioned benches and looked out the window which she noticed to have bars on them. "I want to go home." She wishpered softly to herself.

Krone growled slightly as he looked around the bright gold and red thrown room, he hated waiting for anything. He wanted to see the girls now and choose which one he wanted, she smiled slightly at the thought that he was actually getting a Gemminite Bride. It was a honor to be chosen to get a bride, though he heard that the Gems chose vary young girls to be brides and that most were below twenty. The thought was a mixed one as in Drakken eyes they were extremely young but in the Gems they were just right. Krone sat in one of the chairs that was set out for them and played with his short blade, "I hate waiting." He growled lowly to himself, he wondered if they were just choosing the girls today so that they were "fresh" and didn't have time to think. Ruthless but he loved it, it was a good way to get them.


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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Tatterdemalion » Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:16 pm

Clowesia wrote:
/PULLSHAIROUT.
I keep writing MASSIVE RP replies. Dx
Like I just wrote nine medium-thick paragraphs when the norm is like four smallish ones.
I AM HORRIBLE.
I THINK I JUST BLATHER ON.
Why must I do thiiiiiiiis.

Maybe I should start RPing at a higher level again. xD
Can anyone here write about 8 paragraphs relatively easily? ouo

I've always wanted to try! I know I can get pretty wordy, just again depends On what I have to work with. I think the most I've done is something close to six. Soooo if you ever feel like taking a newb under your wing with the 8+ paragraph thing... Pleaseloveme?
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You don't see what you possess, a beauty calm and clear
It floods the sky and blurs the darkness like a chandelier
All the light that you possess is skewed by lakes and seas
The shattered surface, so imperfect, is all that you believe
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Verdana » Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:19 pm

Thanks very much.

Hey there, .imagination. and Kites!

My favourite post would probably be either one of my Val ones (so, the one in my form, for example) or one from Aurmata. I loved one particular thread to bits. Here's one of those posts:

This... Is not looking good for me. The kid is not buying my skilled and eloquent line of argument. Then again, I'm uncertain if he even realises what I'm telling him. He's such a ridiculous individual, I doubt if he would know a good deal if it came up and kissed him on the nose. And what I'm offering is not a bad compromise. He doesn't know that (unless he's done excessive research into my background since I last saw him, which due to his apparent nature I somewhat doubt) and, right now, I am not really in an adequate mental state to explain in a crafty and Shaygrinesque manner.

His face is dark and brooding, and continues to be so while he debates my fate. I am not often in a situation where I am relying so much on someone's good will (because most people have very little 'good will' and thus it is very unwise to rely on it) and I don't like it. Nuh uh. Not one bit. It's like I'm being led to the guillotine for slaughter, especially with the boy looking as worryingly withdrawn as he is. But his eyes sort of... Look, maybe I'm delusional and desperate (true in most cases, but maybe it's more pronounced now) but it seems like he is starting to think about my proposition. I've appealed, you see, to his selfish desires. I have...

The clomp of heavy boots shakes the ground. I tense, alarmed. No no no no no, they're coming and if they see me here... Horrible visions assail me, of being dragged through dark, cold, wet dungeons, of whips and barbed hooks and (it may sound strange to someone ignorant of this brand of torture) small porcelain teacups. I begin to gather what I have left of my strength, eyes becoming steely with determination. If I have to go out, at least I'll go out with a bang. Give these neanderthals something to remember me by.

They're shaking the door now, requesting entrance. However, I refuse to believe that I've lost this. I don't lose. Something's going to happen. Either the guards will lose interest, or some unknown brand of power will come to me, or, unlikely as this is, the kid will come to my rescue. I don't lose. I refuse to lose. It just doesn't happen to me. The boy faces the door with a testy growl, and my understanding of how my... Proposition, was accepted, begins to alter. Because the boy hesitates. He doesn't open the door and immediately make my presence known. He's thinking about it. He's considering this.

And then I knows there's hope for him, and therefore myself, yet.

No, don't think too soon. He goes to the door, ready to wrench it open and reveal me to his burly bodyguards. Then he stops. I watch him warily, fron under suspicious lids. I wish he'd just make up his mind. This indecision thing is getting tedious. Make up your mind, boy, I will him. Be done with it.

I am getting tired by now. Losing the clarity. When I feel the Cloak wrap around me, I don't resist. My whole body sort of sags inwardly in relief. He'll hear me out. That gives me time. I'm not doomed yet. For all I know, his plans for me could be more dreadful than anything that his enthusiastic but numb-skulled guards could come up with. But I have time.

And with time, I can do almost anything.

I stay still, watching the play unfold before me. For all his faults, the kid is a passable actor. He doesn't make any rookie mistakes, like glancing towards me or tilting his shoulders in my direction. He's tetchy, commanding and generally princely. The guards never suspect a thing. They must feel like me, I muse, and not want to get too close to that inferno on little Ray's head. What is it about fire that makes me want to hide in a corner? I really must get over my fire aversion. Maybe later.

The door slams shut. I am undiscovered. The Cloak lifts off of me. I make sure to keep my posture strong, even though the corners of my vision are starting to fog a little. Just a little. Aww, bless the little fellow, he's trying to be professional. We both know he's insanely curious about my proposition. He sits at his desk, eyes averted, and asks me to elaborate. I'd be delighted. But, while I do... That almost-encounter with the thugs was far too close. Stupid of me. I need to fix that.

As I start to speak, I sling my pack (delicately) off of my shoulder, and begin to root around in it.
[color=008ee0]See, in theory, I could do pretty much whatever you want,[/color] I begin, withdrawing various vials and tinctures from the depths of my bag.
[color=008EE0]Jobs? I could be the most successful bodyguard you've ever had. I could be your eyes and ears, I could dispose of any obstacles in your way. I could even be your chef, but I wouldn't recommend that. I'm a terrible cook,[/color] I advise. After much careful selection, I choose a bottle with a strand of blonde hair wrapped around the neck. I open it, sniff it, grimace, and continue:

[color=008EE0]But that's not what you want. You don't need a servant. You have lots of those, but none as good as me. See, what sets me apart, is experience.[/color]
I shake the bottle until a thick grey mixture falls onto my fingers. I examine it critically, shrug, place a blob on each of my fingers and run them through my hair.
[color=008EE0]I've been in action for a long time. Longer than most. I have seen empires rise and fall, and played small but vital parts in those cycles. I have watched many leaders. I know what an effective leader needs to be.[/color]

I don't know if the kid is listening or not. It would be stupid for him not to, but he hasn't proven to be very attentive. Anyway, I am in full-on persuasion mode. Which means I talk a lot. And fast. My scalp is starting to itch, so I grab my waterskin and pour the right amount (It's not magic, I've just had a lot of practice) through my hair. Nothing sloshes out, and suddenly, as if by some miracle, I am a honey blonde. I toss my newly-gilded locks around experimentally, before finishing off with:

[color=008EE0]What I think you need is a teacher. And by the blade, I could teach you whatever you wanted to learn. Morehowever, I could give you the skills you need to push yourself into the throne. Toss me to the authorities if you will. But personally, I think it'd be an awful waste.[/color]

Aaand... Scene.


@Clowesia: Oh, I can, easily. If I'm given a bit of time (about an hour) and someone museful to work with, I write pages and pages.

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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Solfeggio » Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:49 pm

Clowesia wrote:
/PULLSHAIROUT.
I keep writing MASSIVE RP replies. Dx
Like I just wrote nine medium-thick paragraphs when the norm is like four smallish ones.
I AM HORRIBLE.
I THINK I JUST BLATHER ON.
Why must I do thiiiiiiiis.

Maybe I should start RPing at a higher level again. xD
Can anyone here write about 8 paragraphs relatively easily? ouo


I-I have a tendency to 'overwrite' too ;-;
when first i appear i seem mysterious
but when explained i'm nothing serious

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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby IgnoreThisAccount » Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:03 pm

Oh my goodness everyone.
Why am I the only one here who can only dish out three paragraphs and that's when I don't have school and someone actually gives me more than three paragraphs?...
I feel so small....
Am I sure wether I'm illiterate or not (Never have the time to find nice semi-lits to join) I'll never know.
No, I'm not whining.
Just pointing out I feel like my paragraphs are cockroaches in front of elephants xD
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby diamonds;; » Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:46 pm

Clowesia wrote:
/PULLSHAIROUT.
I keep writing MASSIVE RP replies. Dx
Like I just wrote nine medium-thick paragraphs when the norm is like four smallish ones.
I AM HORRIBLE.
I THINK I JUST BLATHER ON.
Why must I do thiiiiiiiis.

Maybe I should start RPing at a higher level again. xD
Can anyone here write about 8 paragraphs relatively easily? ouo



    if i really like the plot, then yes, i could. I've got some improving to do, however. if someone gives me an eight paragraph post, with a lot of description in, I could do it. my intros tend to be longer that my other posts unless I have lots of muse.
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Trick; » Wed Sep 28, 2011 10:32 pm

I actually made it ._. Thought I was going to be denied. /yayface

I haven't been doing very high roleplay lately, though I really wish I have been. I can do four paragraphs in a minute or two if the other persons giving me something to respond to, but if they give me something small, I can only double it, with maybe a little more. I hate filling all my posts with fillers, though. I see no point >.>
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby odd... » Wed Sep 28, 2011 11:09 pm

BlissfulFarrago, I should be the one apologizing. I also have a tendency to over-type, of course, when I do not have writer's block.
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby xl Toxic lx » Thu Sep 29, 2011 12:03 am

Over-typing isnt sometimes a bad thing. I love it when I find people who can type me..about SIX PARAS and I can barely type a full one myself...That is when I feel like typing! For me...it depends on the type of roleplay, who I play and weither or not I got a dang thing to do. I really try my hardest to make AT LEAST two paragraghs but for me I get...overwhelmed easily and tend to just never reply till I feel like my post are good enough to post to my...Six Paragrapd friend. xD
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And ever since I figured out
That I could control other people
I've had trouble sleeping
With both eyes closed

And if I asked permission
If I make sure it's ok
I promise I won't slip up this time
You can trust me

But never take advice from someone
Who just admitted to being devious
Who just confessed to treason
And I would also
never ask a question
That I cannot ask myself
For it might
Dirty up your conscience
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