Artist Army {old thread}

[DoctorDraca]

Hey guys! ^^ Long time no see! I have decided to open up a new art shop with my new style! Come check it out! Its open!
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Please don't post here just to promote your artshop. Posting art and linking to your artshop while at it is fine, but sheer promotion is against the rules.

Also, there is a difference between photography and uploading blurry photos of your pets. If you do wish to post a lot of photographs, provide links instead of embedding them all. It saves quite a bit of scrolling issues.

[canter]

Well I am hated by my teach in artclass and he dosnt seem to be helping me at all with my art..so I thought I would ask you guys :)

So I am drawing a picture from my sisters wedding and I am looking for some tips to make this look better, as I really want to show my teacher I can do something good xD

So here is the picture
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff5 ... er/494.jpg
((Inogre the spot on her shoulder..something happened and it wont come off xD))

((and P.S sorry about the darkness..I dont have a scanner so I have to use my Camera

I really dunno how to draw humans, but from seeing them everyday, I suggest that you should out the mouth a little lower, and the nose as well. However that drawing is amazing <3 I love the eyes so much, and I think yu have a great idea of the face shape. That's all I can come up with, please try asking someone with more experience with humans, like Alex.

~ now for my art.. I did not fix any anatomy, sorry about that.. therefore I just want comments/critics on the shading, and ignore the random stripes c;



once again, the ref is here; click meee.

[Calix]

Stonefly- The main problem is that the eyes are too big and the shading is a little too dark on her face. You also might want to add eyelashes along the bottom of her eye. I'm in love with that hair though, gah, I wish I could draw hair like that.


craywolf- That design=love. I'm a sucker for simple designs, and this one is so damn cute <3 Your shading and highlighting is a tiny bit off. It helps to draw a blobby yellow thing where your light source is and draw short 'rays' coming off of it to show where the light would strike. Some areas, like the back, front of the shoulder, and front of the thigh should be highlighted rather than shaded. I love those lines though <3 So nice and clean.


Reposting for any crits or tips on digital painting.
Ref for colors and pose
Tutorial I followed

[rheia]

August; That's looking very good, and I'm rather envious of your skills. <3

--Would anyone like to come watch my livestream? It's my first time using Photoshop. :3 I'm doing a digital painting of Chris Colfer; using a stock photograph underneath the painting to keep me right. Stream
Sorry! ^^; I had to finish it early. I'll upload the image as soon as I'm done, but I have things to do right now. >.< Sorry.

[Stonefly]

Stonefly- The main problem is that the eyes are too big and the shading is a little too dark on her face. You also might want to add eyelashes along the bottom of her eye. I'm in love with that hair though, gah, I wish I could draw hair like that.

Well Thanks for the tips but looking back at my sister and everything she does have overly large eyes and well my Art teacher did one of them xD but in the real drawing its not that dark the camera just made it that way...and last thing..my family all Odd eyes, were when you have then open and wide you can see our bottom eyelashes..We have a weird looking family

[size=85][center][color=#808080]I really dunno how to draw humans, but from seeing them everyday, I suggest that you should out the mouth a little lower, and the nose as well. However that drawing is amazing <3 I love the eyes so much, and I think yu have a great idea of the face shape. That's all I can come up with, please try asking someone with more experience with humans, like Alex.

I can see what you mean byt the mouth..I noticed tat do when I uploaded it and I am working on fixing it right after I posted..But Craywolf, I really like it..but there is something about the ears thats bothering me..I dont know if someone pointed that out alread, or its just me seein thing xD

[Mys]

Hadn't posted...might as well. I mainly do traditional art but am working at getting better on digital art. Here's something I did on Corel Painter Essentials 4. I just played around and came up with it.
http://twitpic.com/90bp06 I also have Inkscape but I'm more clueless with it |D Honestly I use Chibipaint the most. Ah and I did the drawing in my sig.

EDIT: @Stonefly that's really good! I can't draw humans realisticly for the life of me ;U

[Ditzy Doo]

Any crit for these?

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/4/ ... rayal.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/521/73933015.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/52 ... eetah.png/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/836/horsep.png/

Thank you!

[Mys]

Well I like the grass texture in the first one. The second, is also pretty good. The third, try to stay inside the lines a little more. The last one is very good! I've only drawn a horse...once in my life. Let's just say it wasn't very good. T.T

[Ditzy Doo]

Thank you! and yeah..It was late when i did the third one. Ill use your crit! any more is appriciated!

[rheia]

Camo; For the first one, all I can say is that the colouring is a little choppy.
Same for the second one, but also, the eyes on the left cat look a little odd.
The Lion(?) on the left in the third one looks out of proportion and small.
Something about the horse seems off. I can't quite put my foot on it, though. Could I redline?

I figured I'd post this semi-vent art. It's partially art based on something my mother told me earlier, and partially something to do with the novel I'm writing; it plays a very big part. Sort of.
Any comments would be welcome. c: