Artist Army {old thread}

[DoctorDraca]

Here something I finished today and looking for some critique ^^
http://i917.photobucket.com/albums/ad18 ... me01-2.png

I know it might be your style but the limbs are much too long and stretched. The shoulders are almost not there, so try to widen them a bit so you can get the eventual curve leading to the hips to make it a tad more realistic. As Owl pointed out, her right arm (from her POV) looks oddly thin going to her shoulder. I am however, loving the hair and the eyes.

[Fat Unicorn]

Here's some of my latest art. I actually like it now. I'm getting better with anatomy...But I fail at anything but horses.

This is art for a bud. Personally I don't like it but whateva

And this is art for an art trade. I think it turned out okay.

Can I join the Army? I just need to make sure before going a bit physio. ^^;

I saw this on the front page, and couldn't help but to post this. X,D
{because I'm quite good with horses, I'll post a drawing maybe in a week or so, cause my sketches take aggeessss. *moan*}

With the first drawing, the chest needs to be brought out a little, and the neck needs to flow into the shoulder, (if you get what I mean.) I'll redline it if you want me to. The mane needs to loosen up a little, because when your looking at a picture of a running horse, you can see loose strands of mane being flung about - this is what makes your drawing come to life.

With the second drawing, the mane is a bit blockish, loosen up on that. You need a bit more of a curve to the back, to define the withers clearly. Moving up to the head, you might want to add in a bit of a cheekbone, and a curve infront of the eye a bit. Down to the mouth, you need to make the bottom lip a bit more curvy, so it looks a bit like a B. (just without the back bit, lol.)
I can also redline that, but only if you want to.

Sorry if I sounded like some old demanding teacher. x3

@ Gewn Trix, love how the colours blend an the positioning of the tail. I can't really help with it as I suck at drawing dogs. ^^

@ Noa, looks nice, I can't think of anything to critique for that.

Sorry for the long-winded writing. ^^;

[Noa]

@Owl: I see what you mean, thanks o3o

@Nex: Ah I just noticed that, I didn't realize I stretched out the limbs but now I see it. and the shoulders do look a bit small, I'll have to work on that. thanks ^^

[Lilian Nightshade]

I was taking a look at the old thread and just noticed there was a new one XD.

Nice new thread and art :3. I've been after some critique for a recent art of mine, by the way...
http://night-anders.deviantart.com/#/d3nllho

I am still getting used to canine anatomy and this is one of my first tries on drawing a lined canine in digital art. It was a design order...

[antler apathy]

Oh, I just noticed some of the comments I forgot to respond to x3 I'm blind.

Maroon - Thanks ^^ As for the revamp, I was going to say Saluki, but her muzzle build and tail are different than normal. So for now I think she's just some sort of hound. Lisa would be fun :3 I'll consider it.

Becca~ash - You mean one of Cres and Stella's pups? Well there is one left, but I assume Zeph PMed you about it? :3

TRM - I think it's because the mightime sky in both of their faces is so close to the black space between them. But I got it C:

Satan - I love long fluffy tails <3

Lilian Nightshade - I have nothing to say but that it really pretty ^^ I love the design.

[Akami-chan]

@Satan owo Anyone can join, just jump in (like you did) :3
@Lilian Nightshade I really love your work D: I fail too much at canine anatomy to critque you though >.<
Love the little wings by the tail<3 The only thing I don't really like is the blue, but that's a very small issue C:

[lululizzy23]

I was taking a look at the old thread and just noticed there was a new one XD.

Nice new thread and art :3. I've been after some critique for a recent art of mine, by the way...
http://night-anders.deviantart.com/#/d3nllho

I am still getting used to canine anatomy and this is one of my first tries on drawing a lined canine in digital art. It was a design order...

This is stunning as usual. But there's something about the face. I don't know maybe it's just me.

[IgnoreThisAccount]

I was taking a look at the old thread and just noticed there was a new one XD.

Nice new thread and art :3. I've been after some critique for a recent art of mine, by the way...
http://night-anders.deviantart.com/#/d3nllho

I am still getting used to canine anatomy and this is one of my first tries on drawing a lined canine in digital art. It was a design order...

It looks absolutely awesome.
But you know the 'stop'? The part where the muzzle is attached to the face?
Well, it should be a tiny bit more curved. I can try to show you if you want.

[Lilian Nightshade]

I was taking a look at the old thread and just noticed there was a new one XD.

Nice new thread and art :3. I've been after some critique for a recent art of mine, by the way...
http://night-anders.deviantart.com/#/d3nllho

I am still getting used to canine anatomy and this is one of my first tries on drawing a lined canine in digital art. It was a design order...

It looks absolutely awesome.
But you know the 'stop'? The part where the muzzle is attached to the face?
Well, it should be a tiny bit more curved. I can try to show you if you want.

I think I know what you mean, but yes, feel free to show it ^^.

[IgnoreThisAccount]

I don't think I have time to show it like I thought I did