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[while it lasted.]

@ aiae123 ;; I know this might sound ugly, but I need help describing someone's death. If your character just arrived on the scene and saw his friend dying. They say their last words and he dies. I just cant seem to describe that last moment and all the emotions. It is bloody but not to the point of blood everywhere. Thanks ♥

[aiae123]

@Neko
Accepted! Welcome Neko!

@demon
I can write an example scene when I get home or something else.

[while it lasted.]

@ aiae123 ;; thank you! sorry for such a bother.

[aiae123]

@my demon side
Oh you're no bother at all. I don't know anything about the characters, but here's what I got, lol!
As soon as <character>'s eyes fell upon <person>'s dying body, his heart came to a stop. "<Person>!" he cried out. Tears began began to pour down <character>'s face as he ran towards his friend. <character> threw himself on the ground next to <person>, and took his hand. "Don't- please just- I" He couldn't collect his thoughts or think of what to say. Time was slipping by and though he couldn't completely grasp the situation, <character> had gathered up the conclusion that <person> was dying. "<Person>... I- I don't know what to do. I want to help you but I- I can't." Overwhelmed by the situation he continued to search for words, but it was too late and <person> died before him.

[while it lasted.]

@ aiae123 ;; ;v; thank you! now I will send that to my friend and hopefully, we can improve our death scene writing skills. lol

[aiae123]

@my demon side
I'm glad you like it. But, in the future be careful about using other people's writing. I don't mind it, but there are many people who do and will frame you as a thief and you could possibly get in trouble.

[Winstalgia]

Username:
Cracked&Broken
Nicknames:
Weba, Rain, Rainy
Obsessed, Love, Like, or New:
Love
Favorite Roleplay Theme or Topic:
Animals/warrior cats.
Other:
I enjoy fandoms as well. Liike Skyrim, Undertale, etc

[aiae123]

Accepted! Welcome Cracked&Broken! Also, I LOVE Skyrim!

[while it lasted.]

@ aiae123 ;; yeah, I am aware that there are these kinds of people out there. but we are trying to get a few examples and learn something from that so we can add it to our story we are writing :>

[aiae123]

@my demon side
Alright, have fun!