Creative Writing Club (CWC)

[Leaf97]

Welcome to the club Wy-Chan!

[dapperbirdie]

Thank you! I will probably be posting a bit of the first chapter of a novel I am writing today.

[SkySmoke]

Its entirely too long to post here, but if anyone is bored/interested

Designer Dogs Story

There is also a link in my sig. Feel free to add it to the Literature by our Members post if you'd like.

And, there is also this

Originally posted in the CS pet pairs thread

Lune (Shudder before)


Shudder ♀***********************Silence♂

Lune was jerked awake by the raspy, and somewhat annoying, male voice.

“Get up! We can’t stay here!”

She slowly opened her eyes. The last thing she could remember was falling. She looked around for the person the voice belonged to, but couldn’t see anyone.

“W-who are you? Where are you?” She stuttered.

“It doesn’t matter, just get up and get moving!”

Lune mustered all the strength she could and heaved her body to a standing position. She felt oddly detached, like her body would barely hold itself up. She swayed heavily, almost falling.

“Don’t fall! Whatever you do, don’t fall!”

The voice again. It was definitely male, and it sounded young. Now that she was standing she looked around to see if she could find the voice.

“You won’t find me, not here. Just…come on, lets go.”

She shook her head and followed the voice. It was leading her though tunnels and caves. She had no idea where she was and was desperately trying to remember how she had gotten there.

“Where am I?”

“The worst place you can imagine, and if you don’t hurry up, we will both be stuck here…forever.”

“Forever?”

“Yes, death is permanent you know. The only way out, at least of this place, is before they know you are here.”

Lune picked up her pace, following the voice she could not yet see. After a few minutes of twisting and turning they came to a huge chasm. Lune cautiously walked to the edge; the bottom was not visible.

“The only way out is to jump across.” The voice informed her.

“What?! I can’t…there is no way.”

“You have to try. Trust me, you don’t want to be stuck here.”

Lune backed away from the edge, got a running start and leaped as far as she could. To her surprise she landed on the other side, one back foot scrambling on the edge, but other wise okay. Her whole body hurt though and she just wanted to rest.

“Are you here?” She whispered; feeling stupid talking to something she had never been able to see.

“Of course I am. I can’t leave you.”

Lune spun around and gasped. She could see where the voice was coming from. It was a small, white pup. White wasn’t quite the right color though, it was more…translucent…ghost like in appearance. Where its eyes should have been were black holes and it was wrapped in chains; one around his neck that was fastened with a lock, one around his tail and one around his left front paw. His mouth didn’t move when he spoke; Lune heard him in her mind.
“Who…what…are you?” She asked.

“My name is Silence, and I am your soul. Which is why I can’t leave you.”

“My…soul? But you’re…male?”

“Yes, I am. Your soul doesn’t always match your gender.”

“Oh…and…you’re…young?”

“Yea, think of me as your….inner child also. You were very vain and childish in life, and cared mostly about yourself. That greatly effects my appearance. Which is why I have all these chains. You were always so wrapped up in yourself you didn’t notice much else.”

Lune though about how much pride she took in her appearance. She always kept her pure black coat clean and well groomed. The only thing colorful about her were her startling blue eyes. She was a head turner and often drew attention wherever she went. Thinking back, she realize that maybe she had been a little too into her looks.

“A little doesn’t cover it,” Her soul spoke into her mind, “You were selfish and conceited, sometimes to the point of making fun of others because of their looks. It is because of that you have been doomed to walk the earth looking the way you do now. Most people can not see you, but to those who can you will look like their worst nightmare, like walking death. Instead of making people smile, you will make them shudder, and that is your new name.”

“The way I look now? What do you mean?”

“Come.”

Lune - Shudder- followed the pup over to the edge of a lake.

“Go ahead, look for yourself.”

She crept cautiously to the edge and peeked over. What she saw made her sit back in shock. She was nothing but a skeleton with blood red eyes. Instead of being beautiful she was horrifying to look at. She turned to Silence.

“I’m going to look like this…forever?”

“Yes.”

“Why? And why is your name Silence anyway?”

“My name is Silence because for your whole life you let how you look be the focus of your attention. You would ignore that little voice that told you to be nicer. So now, you will walk earth like this forever, so you know what it feels like for people to judge and dislike you based on your looks, and with me to constantly remind you why.”

yay story? lol. Anyhow, do we have a stamp?

[dapperbirdie]

Your story was great!

And I don't think we have a stamp yet. I might make one, but I suck at making them so.....

[SkySmoke]

Your story was great!

And I don't think we have a stamp yet. I might make one, but I suck at making them so.....

Thank you

Hmm...maybe i'll try a stamp...

[Faux Paux]

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Here they are! Not the greatest, but I think they'll do.

[Leaf97]

Wow I love the beginning of the story SkySmoke! I think the way you described how a soul looks like your personality was so creative and I love it! Is the story finished? I'll try to read the rest of it when I have time.

I love the banner Grace thanks so much! I'll put it up on the front page for everyone to use!

I would make a stamp myself but sadly I don't know how to. Only banners XD

[SkySmoke]

Wow I love the beginning of the story SkySmoke! I think the way you described how a soul looks like your personality was so creative and I love it! Is the story finished? I'll try to read the rest of it when I have time.

I love the banner Grace thanks so much! I'll put it up on the front page for everyone to use!

I would make a stamp myself but sadly I don't know how to. Only banners XD

The Shudder/Silence story is complete. It was just a short story to explain their pairing and was originally from the CS Pet pairs thread

Designer dogs is just getting started, even though its on part...8 i think lol

[Karis]

Username: Karis
Favorite Genre of Literature: Fantasy
Favorite Author: All
Favorite Book/Series: all,(especially Twilight, Vampire Kisses)
What inspires you to write: anything
What do you like to write about: mystical creatures, my family, friends, anything possible

[Leaf97]

Welcome to the club Karis!

Okay then I'll try to find the time to read your Designer Dog's story!