Can anyone PM me their criticism about my lore? I'm not gonna get all pushy and mad and stuff so don't worry! I'll take it as constructive criticism not hate expect if you do show signs of hate in there, I might get a bit mad.
Anyways, I made some lore for my dragon, Maneater and I'm wondering how it's like and I want a few opinions so here you guys go, I currently don't have a lot of treasure or gems to finish Maneater's apparel and for treasure, I would need about 30kT for it, I was also a bit lazy to finish the apparel.

There she is.
Anyways, I made some lore for my dragon, Maneater and I'm wondering how it's like and I want a few opinions so here you guys go, I currently don't have a lot of treasure or gems to finish Maneater's apparel and for treasure, I would need about 30kT for it, I was also a bit lazy to finish the apparel.

There she is.











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