I just joined Chicken Smoothie and one of the first things I saw and joined was the LOLO game. I was very excited and adopted all kinds of free pets from various adoption centers to give out as treats, and proceeded to give most of them away as treats. But when I started sending out my story and going trick or treating for myself, I got nothing but tricks from the first five people I sent out to! And the more I sent out, the more tricks I got! So eventually I turned off my lights because barely anyone would treat me back and I was running out of pets! Those who did treat me are saints and I'm so grateful to those who did, but the trick counts vastly over weighs the treats. Is there something wrong with my page? My story?
I'm posting my story here, if anyone sees an issue with it that's causing all this, PLEASE tell me!

Kuria adjusted the wig perched on her head and straightened her dress. This Halloween would be perfect! She has hand sewn her masquerade ball gown and spent countless hours embroidering her it. She was going to be a masquerade ball version of Tauriel, the new elf from The Hobbit. Kuria checked the clock- Oh no! She was going to be late to meet Usagi! Grabbing her trick-or-treat bag, she rushed towards the door. What happened next was through in under a second, her dress caught on the corner of the door and SPLIT! The bottom of the dress ripped clean around the ankles. The dress which had taken up hours of her time was ruined. Practically irreparable. Once she realized, tears filled her eyes. There was no way that she could leave the house.
Kuria reached for the phone to call Usagi, she'd have to cancel, when her mom walked in.
"What's wrong Kuria?" her mom inquired, seeing the tears in her eyes.
"My dress is ruined! Halloween is ruined!" She held up her dress, displaying the tear to her mother. Her mother took the dress into her hands.
"Hmmm, the dress definitely won't be going anywhere tonight.
But I think I might have a solution." Her mother led her back to her bedroom, and began to dig through her closet. Finally, after about 5 minutes of rummaging, her mother procured a large white cloth bag.
"Tonight, I'm going to let you borrow one of my dresses. 15 years ago, I wore this dress on one of the most important days of my life. But chances are, I'll never wear it again. So I'm going to give it to you to put to good use." From inside the bag, she pulls out a gorgeous dress, her wedding dress. Kuria gasped.
"M-mom..." She takes the delicate material between her fingers.
"I want you to use it." She smiles, and helps Kuria get changed into it. With a kiss to her mothers cheek and a million "Thank you”’s, Kuria was out the door and walking fast to meet Usagi.
"Oh my gosh, your dress is so freakin gorgeous! Eeee!" The second Usagi spotted her, she began to squeal.
"It's my mom's! Her wedding gown, actually!"
"How did you convince her to let you borrow it?"
"It's a very long story. Come on, let's get trick-or-treating!" The pair made their way up to the first house.
"Let's split up Kuria, I'll take the next house while you go up to this house. We can cover more ground this way!"
"Sure, that sounds like a good plan." Usagi continued down the road a little way, and Kuria headed up to the door. Taking a deep breath, she rings the door bell and waits for a response.
Trick-Or-Treat!