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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby Disgustedorite » Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:24 am

peridots wrote:hey guys, remember that gemsona i posted earlier, klara/celestine?

i redesigned her, but i wanna make a corrupted form too, for a long comic i'm working on c:

any ideas for her corrupted form?


I can give ideas but you must answer these questions:
1. Why does she get corrupted? Is it caused by trauma, or by actual damage to her gemstone?
2. Does she have any kind of mental illness that could contribute to her corrupted form? If so, what is it?
3. Is there a particular creature (real or fictional) that she would love to be like/dreams about being?
4. Is her weapon something she could incorporate into her form in some way?
5. Is her gemstone in a vulnerable location?
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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby himeru » Sat Nov 21, 2015 12:22 pm

Hohki wrote:
peridots wrote:hey guys, remember that gemsona i posted earlier, klara/celestine?

i redesigned her, but i wanna make a corrupted form too, for a long comic i'm working on c:

any ideas for her corrupted form?


I can give ideas but you must answer these questions:
1. Why does she get corrupted? Is it caused by trauma, or by actual damage to her gemstone?
2. Does she have any kind of mental illness that could contribute to her corrupted form? If so, what is it?
3. Is there a particular creature (real or fictional) that she would love to be like/dreams about being?
4. Is her weapon something she could incorporate into her form in some way?
5. Is her gemstone in a vulnerable location?

1. she got into a fight with her friend.
2. not really.
3. well, something tiger-like, or anything related to fire owo
4. she has a scythe, so yeah, i guess c:
5. it's on her cheek, so yup.
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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby Disgustedorite » Sat Nov 21, 2015 12:38 pm

peridots wrote:
Hohki wrote:
peridots wrote:hey guys, remember that gemsona i posted earlier, klara/celestine?

i redesigned her, but i wanna make a corrupted form too, for a long comic i'm working on c:

any ideas for her corrupted form?


I can give ideas but you must answer these questions:
1. Why does she get corrupted? Is it caused by trauma, or by actual damage to her gemstone?
2. Does she have any kind of mental illness that could contribute to her corrupted form? If so, what is it?
3. Is there a particular creature (real or fictional) that she would love to be like/dreams about being?
4. Is her weapon something she could incorporate into her form in some way?
5. Is her gemstone in a vulnerable location?


1. she got into a fight with her friend.
2. not really.
3. well, something tiger-like, or anything related to fire owo
4. she has a scythe, so yeah, i guess c:
5. it's on her cheek, so yup.


Getting into a fight with her friend causes her corruption, but she doesn't have a mental illness? That's a bit hard to believe (considering that corruption is connected to insanity), but I guess I'll roll with it.

I could see her degrading into a distorted tiger-like form over time, and once she gets to a point where she can no longer use her weapon effectively she would either add the blade to the end of her tail or turn her hands/front paws into blades. Since her gem is in such a vulnerable location, I could also see her adding false gemstones at various points on her body to draw attention away from the real one.

I can do a quick sketch of the stages of her corruption, if you provide a ref of her normal form.
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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby kanni » Sat Nov 21, 2015 12:56 pm

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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby himeru » Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:03 pm

sure!

here's her ref c:
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her new design is just her sweater oversized, and she's shorter c:

well, the fight was pretty serious, so that's why she got corrupted.


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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby frostykitty » Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:12 pm

@peridots - I say something like a... A Phoenix... ONE SECOND LET ME SCETCH, YOU CANT SEE THE PICTURE BY WORDS!!! I know my moonstones gem is on the back of her head, but it moves in her corrt form (an owl monster) to under her head... Her head, it's hard to explain okay but I know most corrupt gems have their gems hidden (like the puffer fish)
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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby himeru » Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:30 pm

frostykitty wrote:@peridots - I say something like a... A Phoenix... ONE SECOND LET ME SCETCH, YOU CANT SEE THE PICTURE BY WORDS!!! I know my moonstones gem is on the back of her head, but it moves in her corrt form (an owl monster) to under her head... Her head, it's hard to explain okay but I know most corrupt gems have their gems hidden (like the puffer fish)

ohh

i like both tiger and phoenix ideas tbh c:

so, wait. a corrupted gem's gemstone can move places?
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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby frostykitty » Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:33 pm

peridots wrote:
frostykitty wrote:@peridots - I say something like a... A Phoenix... ONE SECOND LET ME SCETCH, YOU CANT SEE THE PICTURE BY WORDS!!! I know my moonstones gem is on the back of her head, but it moves in her corrt form (an owl monster) to under her head... Her head, it's hard to explain okay but I know most corrupt gems have their gems hidden (like the puffer fish)

ohh

i like both tiger and phoenix ideas tbh c:

so, wait. a corrupted gem's gemstone can move places?

Well I imagine, I mean the pufferfish's gem was INSIDE it, so I'd think...
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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby Disgustedorite » Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:35 pm

peridots wrote:sure!

here's her ref c:
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her new design is just her sweater oversized, and she's shorter c:

well, the fight was pretty serious, so that's why she got corrupted.


@gothgirl12
awesome!

Is...is her shirt a part of her form? What about her hair? They don't match the gemstone itself.

Can you provide a close-up ref of her gemstone?

Edit: Here's a quick doodle I did to get a feel for her design, corruption ideas coming up next
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(those streaks in her hair were really tough to figure out realistically...)
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Re: Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

Postby ArtsheepNZ » Sat Nov 21, 2015 5:33 pm

Hohki wrote:
peridots wrote:sure!

here's her ref c:
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her new design is just her sweater oversized, and she's shorter c:

well, the fight was pretty serious, so that's why she got corrupted.


@gothgirl12
awesome!

Is...is her shirt a part of her form? What about her hair? They don't match the gemstone itself.

Can you provide a close-up ref of her gemstone?

Edit: Here's a quick doodle I did to get a feel for her design, corruption ideas coming up next
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(those streaks in her hair were really tough to figure out realistically...)


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