X-Cat wrote:'★, wrote:
i present: keystone motel! incase you wanna act it out, or anything, or just want to know everything: here is the entire episode, written out. took me a while.
hope someone finds a use for it.
everything is colored! there is also an included legend!
enjoy.
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--legend
[color=#BF0000]ruby[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]sapphire[/color]
[color=#800080]garnet[/color]
[color=#FFBFBF]pearl[/color]
[color=#400000]greg[/color]
[color=#FFBF00]steven[/color]
[color=#FFBF00]p[/color]earl! where have you been?
[color=#FFBFBF]l[/color]ooking for peridot! for a few days straight.. steven. i know i might've.. dissapointed, all of you. i know garnet's very upset with me. but i'm going to prove to her that she can trust me again!
[color=#800080]-enters-[/color]
[color=#FFBFBF]o[/color]h, garnet! i was just looking for peridot! she's bound to be somewhere, right? any new ideas?
[color=#800080]-silence-[/color]
[color=#FFBFBF]i[/color]'m sorry.
[color=#400000]w[/color]ho wants to go on a roadtrip! uhm, is this a bad time?
[color=#800080]n[/color]o, please continue.
[color=#400000]w[/color]ell i gotta drive over to the next state, keystone.
[color=#FFBFBF]y[/color]ou mean the keystone state?
[color=#400000]r[/color]ight, the state named keystone. i met a guy on an internet message board who's selling car wash brushes for real cheap! i just gotta meet him in keystone and pick 'em up.
[color=#FFBF00]i[/color] don't like those brushes. they feel weird on your fur.
[color=#400000]w[/color]ell, do you like motels?
[color=#FFBF00]p[/color]robably!
[color=#400000]t[/color]hink you'd wanna stay in a motel with your favorite dad?
[color=#FFBF00]i[/color] dunno if you're my favorite..
[color=#400000]w[/color]ha- ah- oh, you kidder. come here.
[color=#FFBF00]i[/color] can't wait to get room service!
[color=#400000]y[/color]ou're thinking of a [i]hotel.[/i] we're going to a [i]motel.[/i] it'll have a pool, and free ice, and it's right next to the best diner in the world.
[color=#800080]i[/color]'m coming too.
[color=#FFBFBF]w[/color]hat?
[color=#FFBF00]e[/color]ven better!
[color=#400000]h[/color]ey, garnet? i know i'm talkin' this place up, but it aint exactly the ritz.
[color=#800080]i[/color]'ll be the judge of that.
--car cutscene
[color=#400000]a[/color]nother great thing about motels? you can drive right up to your door!
[color=#FFBF00]i[/color]'m gonna swim in the pool! order a movie! get free ice! it's gonna be great!
[color=#400000]n[/color]ot before we check for bedbugs, it isn't!
[color=#800080]-enters-[/color]
[color=#400000]g[/color]ood news, we're bugless! oop, that's my cue! hey, mind holding down the fort till i get back?
[color=#800080]-hands shake, before forming a thumbs up sign-[/color]
[color=#400000]g[/color]reat. i'm off to see a man about a tunnel brush. an internet man. if i'm not back in an hour.. call the police.
[color=#FFBF00]o[/color]h kay. bounce with me garnet! or, we can look at brochures! ooh, keystone cavern.
[color=#800080]c[/color]alm down. i didn't feel like forgiving pearl. you don't understand, we must. if you're not going to listen, then you can just GO!
[color=#800080]-unfuses-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]w[/color]e must move past this, ruby.
[color=#FF0000]s[/color]he's lied to us to form sardonyx! she tricked us, don't you feel used?
[color=#FFBF00]r[/color]uby! sapphire! i-
[color=#40BFFF] y[/color]ou're choosing to take it personally
[color=#FF0000]i[/color]t's FUSION sapphire, what's more personal to us, than fusion?
[color=#40BFFF] i[/color] know you're still upset.
[color=#BF0000]o[/color]h, so it's just me?
[color=#40BFFF] o[/color]f course not. can't you see, i'm completely engulfed with rage.
[color=#BF0000]w[/color]ell, it doesn't feeel like it.
[color=#40BFFF] t[/color]he sooner we forgive pearl, the better it will be for us all
[color=#BF0000]y[/color]ou're not as about this as you think you are, urgh!
[color=#40BFFF] y[/color]es. i am.
[color=#BF0000]-rage-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF] y[/color]ou can't stay angry at her for [i]ever.[/i]
[color=#BF0000]w[/color]anna bet?
[color=#40BFFF] r[/color]uby, the carpet.
[color=#BF0000]y[/color]ou- can't even-. [color=#BF0000]-storms out-[/color]
[color=#FFBF00]n[/color]ice to.. see you again?
[color=#40BFFF] n[/color]ice to see you too.
[color=#FFBF00]-exits, following ruby's footsteps to the pool-[/color]
[color=#FFBF00]h[/color]ey ruby! want to swim in the pool?
[color=#BF0000]i[/color]t's fusion, steven! it's like sapphire doesn't even care! and we're supposed to be the bigger gem about this.. we're ALLLLLWAYS the bigger gem! well not this time, not about this!
[color=#FFBF00]c[/color]ome on, why don't you come cool down in the pool? [color=#FFBF00]-cannonballs into the pool-[/color]
[color=#BF0000]i[/color] don't need to [i]cool down.[/i]
[color=#FFBF00]c[/color]ome on, ruby! the water's nice.
[color=#BF0000]-storms into pool- w[/color]hy does she always act like i'm being ridiculous? because she [color=#BF0000]-rest of her talking is muffled, as she paces underwater.-[/color]
[color=#FFBF00]u[/color]h, ruby? you made a warm spot. ah, a hot spot! BOILING! uh, i'm gonna go back to the room.. [color=#FFBF00]-walks into room, and shivers-[/color] sapphire?
[color=#40BFFF]h[/color]ello, steven.
[color=#FFBF00]a[/color]re you doing okay?
[color=#40BFFF]i[/color]'m. fine.
[color=#FFBF00]o[/color]kay. wanna watch TV together?
[color=#40BFFF]s[/color]ure.
[color=#FFBF00]h[/color]uh, all the channels are the wrong numbers. hey, could you use your future powers to predict which channel i'd love the most?
[color=#40BFFF]h[/color]mm, fourty three. but there is not much on.
[color=#FFBF00]h[/color]ey, sapphire?-
[color=#40BFFF]e[/color]ven if i do, ruby won't listen.
[color=#FFBF00]h[/color]uh?
[color=#40BFFF]y[/color]ou're going to say i should talk to ruby. but it wont help.
[color=#FFBF00]b[/color]ut she seems really upset.
[color=#40BFFF]t[/color]hat doesn't matter. we can't stay mad at pearl forever and she can't stay mad at me forever. then one day she'll come back and see that i'm right.
[color=#FFBF00]a[/color]-are you sure?
[color=#40BFFF]i[/color] can see the path of fate as it stretches toward the horizon. ruby can't avoid the inevitable. she's just letting her emotions get out of hand.
[color=#FFBF00]n[/color]-not you, though?
[color=#40BFFF]n[/color]o. [color=#40BFFF]-uses thermo regulation to cast ice on the wall-[/color]
[color=#FFBF00]i[/color]'m going to the bathroom.
[color=#40BFFF]a[/color]lso inevitable.
[color=#FFBF00]u[/color]h, sapphire? the toilets frozen..
[color=#40BFFF]s[/color]uch as fate.
[color=#FFBF00]i[/color]s it my fate to pee outside in the grass, too? [color=#FFBF00]-exits-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]y[/color]es.
--dad comes home
[color=#400000]h[/color]ey shnoball. i brought dinner.
[color=#FFBF00]h[/color]ey dad. how'd it go?
[color=#400000]w[/color]ell he wasn't an axe murderer, so that was good. what are you doing outside in your bathing suit? and were's garnet? [color=#400000]-opens motel door-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]h[/color]e's not gonna like that it's square.
[color=#400000]o[/color]h boy. where's the other one?
[color=#FFBF00]s[/color]he's pacing around in what used to be the pool.
[color=#400000]s[/color]omething pretty serious must be going on if it made garnet split up. but hey, we can still have a good time.
[color=#FFBF00]s[/color]quare pizza! what's wrong with this crazy state!
[color=#400000]s[/color]on, there will come a time in your life, when you learn to accept all pizzas.
[color=#FFBF00]w[/color]hy can't ruby and sapphire just.. make up?
[color=#400000]s[/color]ometime people who love each other can hurt eachother's feelings without meaning too. we should just give them some space.
[color=#FFBF00]b[/color]ut i think they'd work it out if they just talked to eachother.
[color=#400000]e[/color]verything will be better in the morning. we'll all go to the best diner in the world where they'll eat the best breakfast in the world.
[color=#FFBF00]y[/color]ou think that will help?
[color=#400000]n[/color]othing but a little breakfast to bring people together.
[color=#FFBF00]y[/color]ou really are my favorite dad.
[color=#400000]i[/color] knew this pizza would put me over the top.
--timeskip to morning, waitress brings them their food.
[color=#400000]h[/color]ey! thank you.
[color=#FFBF00]t[/color]hanks!
[color=#400000]-looking at ruby- w[/color]hats the matter, not hungry?
[color=#FFBF00]g[/color]ems don't need to eat, dad.
[color=#400000]n[/color]hn, well, garnet likes to eat sometimes.
[color=#BF0000]r[/color]eugh!well garnets not here!
[color=#400000]m[/color]mh, oh boy. this really is the best diner in the world.
[color=#BF0000]-starts to shake the table-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]y[/color]ou're shaking the table.
[color=#BF0000]o[/color]h! ha! i'm kinda surprised you feel anything, to be honest.
[color=#40BFFF]i[/color] didn't need to feel, i saw.
[color=#BF0000]e[/color]eeverthying's just so [i]crystal clear to you,[/i] isn't it? [color=#BF0000]-violently shakes the table-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]t[/color]his will pass. she'll eventually just burn herself out.
[color=#BF0000]t[/color]hats what [i]you[/i] think. i am an eternal flame, baby! [color=#BF0000]-summons her weapon and flips the table-[/color]
[color=#BF0000]-assorted arguments-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]-assorted arguments-[/color]
[color=#400000]h[/color]ey, it's okay, pal. [color=#400000]-says to a teared up steven-[/color] we can still save this. why don't we just bag this up to go and...
[color=#FFBF00]-throws plate on ground-[/color]
[color=#400000]a[/color]h geez.
[color=#BF0000]s[/color]teven!
[color=#40BFFF]s[/color]teven!
[color=#FFBF00]-runs out-[/color]
[color=#BF0000]-runs after him-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]-runs after him-[/color]
[color=#FFBF00]i[/color] was soo happy when garnet said she was going to go on this trip with me and dad! home's been awful! here's been awful! i thought you wanted to have a fun time but everyone's been acting awful too! i-it just came with us! i don't understand.. is it- is it me?
[color=#BF0000]n[/color]-no! steven, it's all us!
[color=#40BFFF]b[/color]ut we made him feel.. like it was his fault.. i keep looking into the future.. when all of this has already been solved.. as if it doesn't matter how you feel in the present.. [color=#40BFFF]-starts to cry-[/color] no wonder you think i don't care..
[color=#BF0000]s[/color]apphire.. n-n-n-no no no, this is all my fault! i didn't want to look for a solution! i-i just wanted to be mad! y-you're right! you're always right! i was being stupid!
[color=#40BFFF]i[/color] don't think you're stupid.
[color=#BF0000]i[/color]'m.. sorry.. [color=#BF0000]-parts sapphire's hair, showing her eye-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]y[/color]ou honestly think i'm not upset over what happened? i was just.. trying to do the right thing.
[color=#BF0000]i[/color] know. you know what's nice about being split up?
[color=#40BFFF]w[/color]hat?
[color=#BF0000]i[/color] get to look at you.
[color=#BF0000]h[/color]ah, be serious!
[color=#40BFFF]t[/color]here's my laughy saphy. [color=#BF0000]-picks sapphire up-[/color]
[color=#40BFFF]s[/color]h! you're embarrassing me infront of steven!
[color=#BF0000]-picks sapphire up wedding-style, and kisses her-[/color]
[color=#400000]-walks up- w[/color]ell, i payed for breakfast. and the damage to the booth. anywho, i think i'm all vacationed out. ready to call it a day?
[color=#800080]n[/color]ot before we get our free ice.
[color=#FFBF00]g[/color]arnet!
--cutscene to home
[color=#FFBF00]w[/color]e're home!
[color=#FFBFBF]i[/color] just don't know why i- oh, you look like you all had fun!
[color=#FFBF00]y[/color]eah, it all worked out!
[color=#FFBFBF]g[/color]arnet, how are you?
[color=#800080]n[/color]ot now.
[color=#FFBFBF]s[/color]he's speaking to me again. well, kind of.
[color=#400000]t[/color]hat really was a great trip.
[color=#FFBF00]c[/color]an we go back?
[color=#400000]m[/color]aybe one day. but, not to that diner.
oh boy.Would you ever have time to do another one of these possibly for Sworn to the Sword or Rose's Scabbard? And awesome work on this one!
- sure! i'll do sworn to the sword now. i kinda also want to add more detail into them, as well.
--edit
if anyone would want to be like an, um, editor, to me, to fix all my grammar/spelling/capitalization mistakes... could you pm me?
--edit dos
for sworn to the sword i'm doing the names a bit different! instead of coloring the first letter, i'll be coloring a star the color of the character talking. just fyi. cx

















