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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby Crystal Gems » Mon Nov 18, 2013 2:49 am

Hey Everyone, I was just wondering if you guys would critic my first of my new book/story, Silver Bullet
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby PFDC » Thu Nov 21, 2013 9:48 am

Since no one did last challenge, here's a new one!

Challenge of the Day!(THIS ONE LASTS UNTIL FRIDAY!)
I'll try to do one every day.
whoever takes part will get an Uncommon pet if they follow the prompt
Tomorrow ill tell you how to improve, and what you did well
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Today's challenge!
Take a quote from here(yes they are all from the manga BLEACH. I chose them because they are good and not because of where they came from) and write either a short story or a poem based on it, WITHOUT actually referencing the quote(so you can't use the quote in your work at all). On Friday or Saturday ill have a form with the names if everyone who completed the challenge on it. You will PM me the form with your guesses of which quote they used! Person to get the most right wins a 2010 rare and one headshot from me! My art: http://torakspackbrother.deviantart.com/gallery/
WE REALLY NEED MORE PARTICIPANTS THAN USUAL FOR THIS TO WORK

FORM(S) NEEDED FOR THIS CHALLENGE!

PM this to me!

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[b]PFDC! Here's my quote![/b]
Quote you used: [quote="Tite Kubo"] your quote here[/quote]
Why you picked it:
(Delete this after reading) I(PFDC) will not be taking part in the guessing game, but I need to know what quotes you used so I can reward a winner properly


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[b]I HAVE COMPELETED THE CHALLENGE![/b]
Completed challenge:

What was easy:

What was hard:

What you learned:


mine:
I HAVE COMPELETED THE CHALLENGE!
Completed challenge:

The battle never won
A fear beyond comprehension
To never know
When it will rear it's head
And decimate dreams
It leaves in its wake
Death and pain
Sorrow
Hate
There is no escaping
The quiet fall of night
Nor the rise of morning
Will let it slumber
It is always there
Never to be forgotten
Avoided
Or loved
It is a thing to be feared


What was easy:
Writing this poem. It's been cooking in my head for awhile!
What was hard:
Not referencing the quote directly
What you learned:

Quotes are called such for a reason. They aren't our words, so we shouldn't use them in writing as often as we do
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby No Going Back » Thu Nov 21, 2013 11:00 am

You've read the Chronicles of Ancient Darkness?
I'm not sure if I'll be able to take part in this one- I discovered NaNoWriMo and have decided to attempt to get the full 50k words in half the time, so I don't have much time for other stuff at the moments. If I'm able too though, I'll edit it in.
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby {Inked Hearts} » Thu Nov 21, 2013 11:25 am

Anyone else hate mushy stories but cry inside when somebody dies,even if you love death and destruction like myself?
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby No Going Back » Thu Nov 21, 2013 11:38 am

If it's someone I'm attached to (usually the villian, which only ever leads to heartbreak) I cry outside, too.
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby PFDC » Thu Nov 21, 2013 12:05 pm

No Going Back wrote:You've read the Chronicles of Ancient Darkness?
I'm not sure if I'll be able to take part in this one- I discovered NaNoWriMo and have decided to attempt to get the full 50k words in half the time, so I don't have much time for other stuff at the moments. If I'm able too though, I'll edit it in.

Yes! But how did you know???
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby No Going Back » Thu Nov 21, 2013 12:26 pm

the powers your deviantart url XD
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby PFDC » Thu Nov 21, 2013 12:49 pm

No Going Back wrote:the powers your deviantart url XD

XD oh yeah it's been that for so long I forget sometimes
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby scmarshtacky » Thu Nov 21, 2013 5:40 pm

Quick Question about the challenge: Are we limited to the first page of quotes?
It's going to be hard to write something without different scenes from Bleach popping into my head. XD I've been watching it lately, but it seems like most of these are from earlier in the series.
There's so many good anime quotes out there. ^^
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Re: ~ Young Writers Club ~

Postby PFDC » Thu Nov 21, 2013 10:44 pm

It can be any quote from the link I gave you ^^
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