Artist Army {old thread}

[IgnoreThisAccount]

Anyone want to redline and give brutally honest critique on this:

and this:


They are two customs from my art shop and I would very much like to improve further even though these are two of my better pieces! :3

Here I come as usual
#1-The first could really use a bigger left (The cat's right) paw, as it just looks a tiny bit small. Maybe it's just me but the tail is a little too long. And the left (Cat's right) ear could be moved up a bit so it's more on the head. The chest needs to be a bit smaller too.
#2-Looks good, but the toes of the paws have no size difference, while the middle two ones should be larger. Also, the part of the tail in front of the cat looks a little too straight

Now le's hope I didn't sound like an old, angry school teacher.
I can try to redline if you like

[☪ℓυηαя∂яσρ☪]

Anyone want to redline and give brutally honest critique on this:

and this:


They are two customs from my art shop and I would very much like to improve further even though these are two of my better pieces! :3

On the first one, it looks like the eyes are to small and tall, maybe if you widened them a little...

[Akami-chan]

Here's a redline D: But don't take it too seriously, because I'm not so awesome at drawing animals
I fixed the placement/position of the legs/arms
And made the eyes wider
For that cat, you know a few things
It hunts, and it's nocturnal XD
The lighter color around its eyes help maximize the light it takes in at night C:
So it'd make sense for the eyes to be big as well- to absorb more light owo

[☪ℓυηαя∂яσρ☪]

This is the spirit of a golden retrevier that I made for an art shop customer. I draw my spirits with no pupils, and with stars swarming their paws. The crescent moon with a drop of water on it is my signature. I'd appreciate some critism or redlines if anybody would.

[gingertail98]

Thank you all of you! I will take all this in to consideration to improve next time. The first one was an ocelot by the way and it's tail looked rather long in many of the pictures I looked at ^^ thanks again. Oh owl of rain now the critique was exactly what I wanted. If you could redline the second one I would appreciate it very much!

[Noa]

Could more than one person red-line this sketch for me? It's a hyena. ^^

[IgnoreThisAccount]

Fail at redlining second image:

[Stonefly]

Well this place looks like its going to be a nice little place for me to get help and talk about art >:)

Well first of all, i am trying to draw horses without lines..((well i am just working on heads..))

and well here is my frist one:


I was just wondering what i could do to add to it to make it look better..because something is off

and dont look at the ear and above area..i didnt do that because i got lazy there..but i am doing it on another horse i am working on

[The_Tide_Keeper]

Joining, if I'm doing something wrong let me know XD.

Houndoomlover: I'm not very skilled with horses, but I'd add detail and correct coloring to the mouth (teeth, tounge... etc). Where the bottom of the neck starts may need to be brought up a little bit. Get a second opinion because I don't know horse anatomy very well, but it looks very nice right now, I'd love to see the finished version

I could really use someone good with human anatomy to red line this, it's a commission for a good friend of mine and I want it to be as good as I personally can make it XD. He's supposed to look 13, he's building "Last resort" with legos... any critique at all would be appreciated



EDIT:
Also he has a tail and I don't know what to do with it XD. I'd like it to be curled up over his back to show confidence.

[☪ℓυηαя∂яσρ☪]

This is the spirit of a golden retrevier that I made for an art shop customer. I draw my spirits with no pupils, and with stars swarming their paws. The crescent moon with a drop of water on it is my signature. I'd appreciate some brutal critism or redlines if anybody would.