[emworld]

yay I really like how this turned out! hope I win

[~Feather*Tail~]

I like it! But one thing...... Eagleheart and Tansyface are not correctly colored, and none of them have tabby markings..... Sorry if I'm being mean or anything..... It would only increase your chances of winning

[emworld]

can i edit it then???

[~Feather*Tail~]

Of course you can :3

[emworld]

one thing, so don't make them plain make them like some of the kits I did?

[~Feather*Tail~]

Ummm.... ones that she the have tabby markings or spots, please make them have tabby markings or spots. I also what them to be correctly colored.

[emworld]

what??? they aren't colored right? witch ones?

[~Feather*Tail~]

Eagleheart and Tansyface (Medicine cat and medicine cat apprentice)

Eagleheart is supposed to be dark brown, in your picture he's gray

Tansyface is supposed to be gray like her mother, in your picture she's blue gray.....

Sorry, I really appreciate your entry! But you didn't include any markings, either. I hope you'll fix it! Other than the minor flaws, I really like it! :3

~Feather~

[emworld]

Okay, so I fixed the two cats, are they right know? Then I did my best with the tabby mark on one of then, how did I do?I know it is not the best but it is my best...

[~Feather*Tail~]

I like it! Which ones did you do? Is Robinfeather on there? And Rabbitfoot?