[AshJackson21]

^^

[die Lille]

I'm not so much into the design... it's a bit too much of everything...
maybe you could keep it a bit more simply?

and did you try to use the smoothing tool?
it's the last one in the right upper box... I allways use it on 75% or more... it makes your lines less shakily ^^

But I'd love to see another try of you =)