okay ... first:
both of you entries got a like =)
and a judgment of
I really like how you used the colours and how you blended them into each other on the adults wing and on the juvenile.
you could turn the

smily into a

smiley if you would add some facial markings... either from the mother or from the father (or a mix) or something completely new...
Your colouring skills are quite good but I'm missing a bit of the similarity to the parents...
and... maybe for your information... I like the first entry better... but just a nano bit ^^