[darkwater]

(edited the story humans are no longer in it, only remnants of buildings from when humans roamed once upon a time))

Name:(Preferably not plain)Kaddic
Age (at most 200 years):(50 is about an average pup/trainee age, 100 actually being adult, 150 nearing elder years. If your Isnaroh is 200 it is nearing death.)49
Gender: (Self explanatory)Male
Antler type: (Name of the Antlers you used on the wolf)Mule Dear Antlers
Marking Types:(For what type of wild cat(s) you creation is based off of)Snow Leopard and tiger (the grey are traces of the snow leopard in him) stripes for tiger and the spotted patterns for snowleopard
Region: (North, South, East, West or Central)(Central is where the main pack/tribe is)West
Rank:(Trainee, Defender, and Hunter are the only ranks available)trainee
Parents:(can be deceased, If not deceased they MUST have an age. No general statements such as elderly or young etc.)deceased
Personality:(things such as Courageous, shy, etc.)fierce, courageous, outgoing, rambunctious, loyal, faithful, strong, stubborn
Story:(MUST BE CREATIVE, Best if more then two paragraphs) It was cold and damp, the storm was powerful and the rain was pouring down. Gale A female snow leopard was treading through the wind, The wind was howling fierce and was blowing hard in her face. She was pregnant and about ready to have pups, so she and her mate Raque (a bangal tiger) trudged through the sleet and snow. "Gale we must find some shelter" said Raque worriedly, but all Gale did was press on trying to find a place to have her pups. In the distance she saw a warn down building "No!" said Raque firmly "We are not going to have our pups in a human den." He looked at her with sorrowful eyes "I am going to have my pups somewhere Raque and I don't see a den inside other then the run down building." Raque nodded his head in understanding, its not like he loved the idea, but he knew Gale would have her pups somewhere but he didn't want that somewhere to be in the middle of the storm without shelter. When they got near the building Raque smelled the area for the Sorrith. He took it 3 good whiffs but smelt no trace of them, than he looked around the building for a place Gale could have her pups. Eventually he found a small room with old blankets, "Gale", he called as he tried to get her in the room, "Yes" she called back waiting for a little for a response "You can have your pups here" Gale listened and followed the sound of her mates voice until she came across a small room with white walls and vines creeping up to the ceiling. She curled up into a corner to have her pups. Raque grabbed the rundown blanket and put it on top of his mate.
About 5 hours later the first pup was born Raque and Gale looked at the first born as he crawled/waddled to his mother to get some fresh milk. He had gorgeous orange fur with stripes and spots, what shocked the both of them is he had traces of grey with in his fur. "He is beautiful Gale" said Raque while admiring his first born son of this litter. Gale licked her son and asked Raque what they should name him "How about Kaddic" Raque looked at the little one sucking fiercly on his moms teat, "If fits perfectly he replied as he went to lick his boy. 1 more hour later another pup was born this time though it was a girl, she was a bronzy grey color with a white spot on her chest, Gale started to lick her gently. No movement the pup did not move nor did she open her eyes "whats wrong" asked Raque anxiously "I don't know" replied Gale licking her pup more fiercely as tears started to form. As this was occurring Raque caught a scent of something odd, it was a Sorith, A big bull standin tall, it seemed to lift its nose in the air and smell a fiew tiems. Hurrying Raque ran to Gale with eyes wide, worried and stressed Gale saw the look on Raques face "What is it" Raque was quiet but Gale wasn't going to have it this time. "Raque! What is it?" this time he answered to Gales demand. "I don't know but it smells weird", he stopped a sec "I will go look and see what it is" Gale nodded and continued to lick the still born in hopes of the little pup surviving.
Raque snarled then quietly backed away to head towards his mate and only surviving pup. "Gale" he whispered we have to leave!" she nodded and got up carefully than grabbed Kaddic gently by the scruff. *arf Aaaarf* the pup wined a little and before you knew it the bull sorith was running to the room. when He got to the tiny white room they found the pup, the mom, and the dad getting ready to leave. Gale handed Kaddoc to Raque "get him out of here" she said quickly, Raque looked confused for a second than put the pup down behind him to get ready to fight. "Get out of here now Raque" she said angry that he didn't leave, than continued on more calm and collected, "I will not be able to escape the Sorith, I am to weak and cannot go to far" Raque looked at her tears rolling down his eye "alright" he quickly gave his mate a last kiss than grabbed the pup and bounded off. Gale crouched down getting ready to attack the bull Sorith, in turn the bull hooved the ground angrily. Eyes wid and nose flaring the Sorith charged in for the kill. Gale leaped at him, The bull quickly manuvered around her and reared, Gale charged in snarling and jumped high in the air, she landed on the back of the Sorith and bit down on the neck.The Sorith tried to buck off Gale but this just tightened her death grip on his flesh. Finally the sorith droped down and rolled to where he crush the Isnorah, and in doing so he broke some of Gales ribs, "At least they had time to get away" she thought as she faded into nothingness.
Raque was running with the pup, he was wining and could sense that something was wrong, "Its ok my son we will be with the others soon" he cooed to his boy. "With the Isnarohs that came from the Western pack there is another female that is providing milk, their my son you will be safe." The pup continued to cry as his father ran as fast as his feet would take him, with every breath and stride he got farther from the Sorith who would try to hunt them down. About after an hour of running Raque took a break he was breathing heavily and he was tired. He stopped, slowed down and went under a tree to help shelter them both from the elements. Raque closed his eyes and started to sleep, he snored heavily as his son curled in a ball and snuggled to him as close as possible. The bull Sorith followed the scent of Raque's trail, while being careful not to be noticed. He saw the Isnorah lying down quietly asleep, the bull started to close in for the kill. Thanks to the Sorith stepping on a leafe Raque started to stir his ears perked and his eyes opened to slits than slowly start to get a bit wider.
The Sorith charged in to try and at least wound the Isnaroh, but what he had yet to find out is he had a pup with him. He bared his fangs, as Raque charged in The Sorith swung his head leaving a gash along Raques leg though Raque had time to strike back, he crouched low and pounced on the cannon of the Sorith to slow the bull down. Quickly without thinking Raque grabbed his son and quickly left hoping that he wounded the bull enough. The bull wanted to kill this Isnaroh for hurting him and would do anything to do so. He knew he had to get out of there since it was suicide to take on a bull alone so he grabbed his son and ran. The Sorith followed though they were going at a slower pace which helped him gain ground away from them. Back on the run Raque ran into a friend of his, "please take my son to someone who can nurse him" he said while panting heavily. "Raque what happened" the Isnaroh asked frantically, "No time" he gasped. His friend took the pup and bounded off, Raque turned back to go after the bull Sorith, this time he knew he would not escape and that he would most likely die.
Other:Kaddic is Kodiacs younger brother, when his mom and dad left she was pregnant but didn't know yet, Kaddic made it to the group but never got to know his parents, they died defending him. The only living sibling or relative to him is Kodiac

item info-Kaddic found a collar and decided it looked cool so he put it on his right ankle, as he ages he will gain more trinkets

3 facts-
1.the leader is a healer as well
2.The isnaroh are as intellagent as humans
3.the larger the antler or horns the older the isnaroh is

color info-
base is white
2ndary color is orange
the gray is spray painted
markings are black and so is the nose and paws
they eyes are green with blue around the iris
and the tongue and parts of the gums are pink

(I figured to make Kodyacs brother Kaddic, the idea just came to me and it explains what happened to his parents"
Note:his brother takes more after Raque the tiger, though their are signs of snowleopard in him

[darkwater]

edited everything if you have comments or suggestions I would love to hear them

[Tundra]

Ok you missed a few

*she nodded and got up carefully than grabbed Kaddic gently by the scruff. *arf Aaaarf* the pup wined a little and before you knew it the humans were running to the room. when they got to the tiny white room they found the pup, the mom, and the dad getting ready to leave. Gale handed Kaddoc to Raque "get him out of here" she said quickly, Raque looked confused for a second than put the pup down behind him to get ready to fight. "Get out of here now Raque" she said angry that he didn't leave, than continued on more calm and collected, "I will not be able to escape the humans, I am to weak and cannot go to far" Raque looked at her tears rolling down his eye "alright" he quickly gave his mate a last kiss than grabbed the pup and bounded off. *

thats the only thing i see wrong. Otherwise you got it all.

[darkwater]

Ok you missed a few

*she nodded and got up carefully than grabbed Kaddic gently by the scruff. *arf Aaaarf* the pup wined a little and before you knew it the humans were running to the room. when they got to the tiny white room they found the pup, the mom, and the dad getting ready to leave. Gale handed Kaddoc to Raque "get him out of here" she said quickly, Raque looked confused for a second than put the pup down behind him to get ready to fight. "Get out of here now Raque" she said angry that he didn't leave, than continued on more calm and collected, "I will not be able to escape the humans, I am to weak and cannot go to far" Raque looked at her tears rolling down his eye "alright" he quickly gave his mate a last kiss than grabbed the pup and bounded off. *

thats the only thing i see wrong. Otherwise you got it all.

fixed thanks Tundra