I feel like there is something missing.. 
Name: Kallinos
Age (at most 200 years): 62
Gender: Male
Antler type: Aoudad
Region: East
Rank: Trainee
Parents:
Father - Valerian - meaning strong and powerful - died fighting the sorith
Mother- Honrea - meaning honerable, and will never betray - died in a fight agaianst the sorith
Personality: Bright and eager to learn, Kallinos learns quickly and can make many friends. Eager to help out he will rush to help even if he is not supposed to, this causes some anger among the others. Most seem to find his wiliness just a little over the edge which is true. Under the mask of kindness he hides a much darker side, a side that was made when he saw his parents die in front of him. He hides his inability of trusting anyone with a bright willingness to love anyone. Among other troubles he finds it hard to sleep and would rather train and be alone that be surrounded by others. His willingness to learn is true for he wishes to avenge the death of his parents. He will stop at nothing to be able to achieve that goal even if it means risking his life or others. However he never shows this and pulls others towards him with his genuine love to learn.
Story: Kallinos sliced through the water his tiny head peeping out of the water the gold eyes searching the bank of the river for the pair of dark colored anteer that where his parent. his mind whirled with ideas, plans to startle or scare them, the thoughts where so built up that he nearly missed the movement of his mothers head as she turned around to glance behind her. In a flash he had dunked his head under the water squeezing his eyes shut, it was unknown to him but even in the darks of the red water he still managed to stand out. His black coat with the brown strips and light antlers where like a beacon of light against him. His mother chuckled and stood leading his father away. Kallinos peeped up again his young mind jolting as he realized they had left. He clawed his way to the edge of the river hauling himself out. His eyes flickered around and suddenly everything seemed very large and scary. The shadows moved closer and seemed to reach out at the young pup grasping and grabbing for him. He yelped his eyes widening and he pinned his soft ears against the back of his head, the black fur that ran down the back of his neck stood straight up and his tail curled up and under his belly. His paws skittered across the dirt as he hurried after his parents. The fear in his heart burned into him as he fled. Slowly he panted to a stop and realized that the shadows had not come after him in fact now he had realized that they did not seem so scary at all. He leaped and pounced at the shadows his big grey paw batting playfully at the darkness. The large paws showed he would be big and he bunched his hind legs and leaped into the air, for him it was a huge leap but compared to everything else it was a jump worthy of nothing less, small and insignificant. Then he whirled around racing towards his mother to join her and father as they headed back. As they arrived the sounds of battle meet the young anteers ears and his mother and father hurried ahead with Kallinos right behind them. The sight that meet them was terrible they hade been invaded and everyone was fighting. Time ceased to continue in the Kallinos’s mind as he was shoved aside to small to help and to weak to fight. He saw many fall that night and among the bloodshed and death he watch unable to help as his mother and then father in turn died. Anger filled him each time, anger so deep the young and innocent sweet guy he used to be was painted with a blood red, his pure hate rose and has never ceased ever since.
Other: one thing before the facts, I love them, they are so cool. the idea of them is something I again envy. really cool keep it up
1) Isnaroh will wear jewlery and other accesories but refuse to wear bones because they insult the prey
2) the female Isnaroh do have antlers unlike normal dear.
3) There are 5 leaders altogether, and 2 alpha leaders
Name: Kallinos
Age (at most 200 years): 62
Gender: Male
Antler type: Aoudad
Region: East
Rank: Trainee
Parents:
Father - Valerian - meaning strong and powerful - died fighting the sorith
Mother- Honrea - meaning honerable, and will never betray - died in a fight agaianst the sorith
Personality: Bright and eager to learn, Kallinos learns quickly and can make many friends. Eager to help out he will rush to help even if he is not supposed to, this causes some anger among the others. Most seem to find his wiliness just a little over the edge which is true. Under the mask of kindness he hides a much darker side, a side that was made when he saw his parents die in front of him. He hides his inability of trusting anyone with a bright willingness to love anyone. Among other troubles he finds it hard to sleep and would rather train and be alone that be surrounded by others. His willingness to learn is true for he wishes to avenge the death of his parents. He will stop at nothing to be able to achieve that goal even if it means risking his life or others. However he never shows this and pulls others towards him with his genuine love to learn.
Story: Kallinos sliced through the water his tiny head peeping out of the water the gold eyes searching the bank of the river for the pair of dark colored anteer that where his parent. his mind whirled with ideas, plans to startle or scare them, the thoughts where so built up that he nearly missed the movement of his mothers head as she turned around to glance behind her. In a flash he had dunked his head under the water squeezing his eyes shut, it was unknown to him but even in the darks of the red water he still managed to stand out. His black coat with the brown strips and light antlers where like a beacon of light against him. His mother chuckled and stood leading his father away. Kallinos peeped up again his young mind jolting as he realized they had left. He clawed his way to the edge of the river hauling himself out. His eyes flickered around and suddenly everything seemed very large and scary. The shadows moved closer and seemed to reach out at the young pup grasping and grabbing for him. He yelped his eyes widening and he pinned his soft ears against the back of his head, the black fur that ran down the back of his neck stood straight up and his tail curled up and under his belly. His paws skittered across the dirt as he hurried after his parents. The fear in his heart burned into him as he fled. Slowly he panted to a stop and realized that the shadows had not come after him in fact now he had realized that they did not seem so scary at all. He leaped and pounced at the shadows his big grey paw batting playfully at the darkness. The large paws showed he would be big and he bunched his hind legs and leaped into the air, for him it was a huge leap but compared to everything else it was a jump worthy of nothing less, small and insignificant. Then he whirled around racing towards his mother to join her and father as they headed back. As they arrived the sounds of battle meet the young anteers ears and his mother and father hurried ahead with Kallinos right behind them. The sight that meet them was terrible they hade been invaded and everyone was fighting. Time ceased to continue in the Kallinos’s mind as he was shoved aside to small to help and to weak to fight. He saw many fall that night and among the bloodshed and death he watch unable to help as his mother and then father in turn died. Anger filled him each time, anger so deep the young and innocent sweet guy he used to be was painted with a blood red, his pure hate rose and has never ceased ever since.
Other: one thing before the facts, I love them, they are so cool. the idea of them is something I again envy. really cool keep it up
1) Isnaroh will wear jewlery and other accesories but refuse to wear bones because they insult the prey
2) the female Isnaroh do have antlers unlike normal dear.
3) There are 5 leaders altogether, and 2 alpha leaders
