[astraf]

c:

edit: i changed the design! it's based off of a cat my grandmother's friend has, and it doesn't have any tabby markings, just to be clear

[CloudedDiamond]

Hey eevee! I love this entry, but here's some tips for future entries

- Cream is more on the orange side instead of yellow ^^
- You seemed to only do the tabby on the gray area and not the cream. Remember that calicos always have tabby on the cream, and aren't solid.
- The stripes seem a little thick and messy, almost? The cream parts also look a little messy and kind of like scribbles? I'm not saying they're bad, they just look a little messy and off to me.
- The nose or paw pads wouldn't be that dark, they should be a lighter pink. If you need examples, you can look at v1
- If you look at v1, we usually don't use white for the outer eye part. Cat's don't have eye whites unless they widen their eyes a lot.