#1 by osamu

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#1

Postby osamu » Tue Feb 04, 2020 9:12 am

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edit: i changed the design! it's based off of a cat my grandmother's friend has, and it doesn't have any tabby markings, just to be clear
Last edited by osamu on Sun Feb 23, 2020 6:12 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: #1

Postby DiamondDogg » Tue Feb 04, 2020 4:32 pm

Hey eevee! I love this entry, but here's some tips for future entries

- Cream is more on the orange side instead of yellow ^^
- You seemed to only do the tabby on the gray area and not the cream. Remember that calicos always have tabby on the cream, and aren't solid.
- The stripes seem a little thick and messy, almost? The cream parts also look a little messy and kind of like scribbles? I'm not saying they're bad, they just look a little messy and off to me.
- The nose or paw pads wouldn't be that dark, they should be a lighter pink. If you need examples, you can look at v1
- If you look at v1, we usually don't use white for the outer eye part. Cat's don't have eye whites unless they widen their eyes a lot.
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