1 ♥ cloud kitten? by zakuro.

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1 ♥ cloud kitten?

Postby zakuro. » Tue Nov 27, 2018 4:14 pm

my first time actually touching the kal lines qvq
v v nervous about posting this,, any critique/tips are appreciated

[s] shine
[c] hair, tail, fur (base of tail)
[u] pupil

here's to hoping my next one will be better! :')
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Re: 1 ♥ cloud kitten?

Postby SandSpider » Tue Nov 27, 2018 4:35 pm

Oh dang what a cutie if I had a myo I’d probably try to claim tbh.

My only criticism is maybe you should try thickening/thinning the lines so the hair and body lines have the same thickness if that makes sense? The lines on the body, mainly legs just look really bold compared to the hair (especially the tail) and I feel they should be thinner, but apart from that I love him and you did amazing
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Re: 1 ♥ cloud kitten?

Postby Thani » Tue Nov 27, 2018 8:08 pm

I agree!
Thickening up the lines a little in places to match the original lineart would make it look a bit better !
Other than that you sryle is heckin adorable and i love the colors you chose.
This is a very adorable kal !!
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Re: 1 ♥ cloud kitten?

Postby zakuro. » Wed Nov 28, 2018 12:13 am

Thani wrote:I agree!
Thickening up the lines a little in places to match the original lineart would make it look a bit better !
Other than that you sryle is heckin adorable and i love the colors you chose.
This is a very adorable kal !!
SmolLilTrashcan wrote:Oh dang what a cutie if I had a myo I’d probably try to claim tbh.

My only criticism is maybe you should try thickening/thinning the lines so the hair and body lines have the same thickness if that makes sense? The lines on the body, mainly legs just look really bold compared to the hair (especially the tail) and I feel they should be thinner, but apart from that I love him and you did amazing


    okay! i will definitely do that. thank you both so much. <3

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Re: 1 ♥ cloud kitten?

Postby FireHope » Wed Nov 28, 2018 7:42 am

I love the eye color, it is similar to my own eye color, so pretty! I love the color scheme!
Is there a way to get someone to make a kalon for me if I have an uncommon myo? or would I have to pay them somehow?
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Re: 1 ♥ cloud kitten?

Postby zakuro. » Wed Nov 28, 2018 9:11 am

FireHope wrote:I love the eye color, it is similar to my own eye color, so pretty! I love the color scheme!
Is there a way to get someone to make a kalon for me if I have an uncommon myo? or would I have to pay them somehow?


    thank you so much!

    it honestly depends on the artist, some charge for customs and some are willing to do them for free.

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