[CloudedDiamond]

Here is my first entry with the provided line edits. I will go back and forth between custom edits and these. I will probably do two of each.

[jennfreckles]

Hey i'm glad you've taken to improving and i hope you don't mind me pointing a few things out

the mistakes center around the ear
1. i think i could see a weird sort of coloring outside of the lines [around the top of the ear]
this could probably be avoided if you used the Lock Alpha feature when coloring
2. the lines of the ear and of the head over-lap and makes it look a bit sloppy/rushed [as if you wern't paying attention to what part of the body is over the other]

other than that everyone would love to have you join the team, if you'd fix what I'm talking about real quick I'll check it over, then you can be added to the team

[CloudedDiamond]

Hey i'm glad you've taken to improving and i hope you don't mind me pointing a few things out

the mistakes center around the ear
1. i think i could see a weird sort of coloring outside of the lines [around the top of the ear]
this could probably be avoided if you used the Lock Alpha feature when coloring
2. the lines of the ear and of the head over-lap and makes it look a bit sloppy/rushed [as if you wern't paying attention to what part of the body is over the other]

other than that everyone would love to have you join the team, if you'd fix what I'm talking about real quick I'll check it over, then you can be added to the team

I fixed the line overlapping. I didn't see anything outside of the ear (I did use lock alpha), but I erased around just in case.

Can I create another one if I do get accepted to be the one I keep?

[jennfreckles]

Hey i'm glad you've taken to improving and i hope you don't mind me pointing a few things out

the mistakes center around the ear
1. i think i could see a weird sort of coloring outside of the lines [around the top of the ear]
this could probably be avoided if you used the Lock Alpha feature when coloring
2. the lines of the ear and of the head over-lap and makes it look a bit sloppy/rushed [as if you wern't paying attention to what part of the body is over the other]

other than that everyone would love to have you join the team, if you'd fix what I'm talking about real quick I'll check it over, then you can be added to the team

I fixed the line overlapping. I didn't see anything outside of the ear (I did use lock alpha), but I erased around just in case.

Can I create another one if I do get accepted to be the one I keep?

go ahead and creat one more ;3