Masuku Artist Entry 2 by AnimalAtHeart

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Masuku Artist Entry 2

Postby AnimalAtHeart » Thu May 10, 2018 12:50 pm

Masuku Breeding Artist Entry for Competition I
Username- AnimalAtHeart
Generation- 2
Sex- Female
Link to Parent I-Ammon
Link to Parent II-Aqua
Size- Small
Mutation- N/A
Other?- I'm quite proud of this one, I hope you like it!
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Re: Masuku Artist Entry 2

Postby Gamingerve31 » Fri May 11, 2018 3:53 am

May I critique a little?
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Re: Masuku Artist Entry 2

Postby AnimalAtHeart » Fri May 11, 2018 4:05 am

Gamingerve31 wrote:May I critique a little?

Sure! I need any tips or tidbits I can get !
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Re: Masuku Artist Entry 2

Postby Gamingerve31 » Fri May 11, 2018 4:19 am

AnimalAtHeart wrote:
Gamingerve31 wrote:May I critique a little?

Sure! I need any tips or tidbits I can get !


Alright!

I really like the design and the parents you chose but the only thing that is bothering me a bit is the colors. They seem a bit too bright. It's ok but since none of the parents have bright colors but the offspring does, doesn't really seem to fit.

That's what I think but it may be ok for other people
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Re: Masuku Artist Entry 2

Postby AnimalAtHeart » Fri May 11, 2018 5:14 am

Gamingerve31 wrote:Alright!

I really like the design and the parents you chose but the only thing that is bothering me a bit is the colors. They seem a bit too bright. It's ok but since none of the parents have bright colors but the offspring does, doesn't really seem to fit.

That's what I think but it may be ok for other people


Yes, I did realize this once I had finished that she colors were a little too wild, But I decided not to change it as I had already completed it. I often can get carried away with color!
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Re: Masuku Artist Entry 2

Postby Gamingerve31 » Fri May 11, 2018 5:38 am

AnimalAtHeart wrote:Yes, I did realize this once I had finished that she colors were a little too wild, But I decided not to change it as I had already completed it. I often can get carried away with color!


Alright!
It still looks awesome!
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