[your conscience]

May add color pallette/eye closeup and such
I do believe they'd fit the term bandit
Not sure what you consider "too cartoonish"
It originally started off as a 'yote but then I thought, make it sleeker
If I do not win I'd like to keep them.

[Twilight Prince]

Souldier thinks that your design looks too similar to the Kalmlachts and that you should take it down. I think that it is unique and that instead of taking it down, you should alter it to look less like a Kalmlacht.
That or I think that you could start over.

edit: Souldier says to change the face up.

[your conscience]

I've contacted them. I'll let you know if we come to an agreement.