[KathrynKat]

Ling #1;

Rare;
Hair on chest & rear legs

I think still a WIP
ignore timer... I was talking to my bf

I think I'm just going to for now leave this as a wip and work on an adult and come out with something and maybe add more to this later
this can count as just artist entry if not enough teheh
once I'm complete tho I guess we'll decide tehehe
also will add a color in of no clothing

[SkyGold]

I love the Christmasy theme you have going on, plus the accessories are adorable!

I would suggest on the first one where the stripes on its back change flow are to try and keep it consistent, one way or the other. Or have a better transition between going straight down and at a diagonal.

A little tip that is always fun to try is to color the lines on the inside. Whenever a line is on the flitz's fur, color it a darker shade of the fur (usually don't try on darker colors as the line will be lost). For white fur, I usually color it a lighter shade of one of the other colors the flitz has. As an example, on the first flitz, where the fur connects to the body and there are extra lines, color those a light red or green.

Lastly a rarity fix, medium hair is uncommon, not rare.

[KathrynKat]

I love the Christmasy theme you have going on, plus the accessories are adorable!

I would suggest on the first one where the stripes on its back change flow are to try and keep it consistent, one way or the other. Or have a better transition between going straight down and at a diagonal.

A little tip that is always fun to try is to color the lines on the inside. Whenever a line is on the flitz's fur, color it a darker shade of the fur (usually don't try on darker colors as the line will be lost). For white fur, I usually color it a lighter shade of one of the other colors the flitz has. As an example, on the first flitz, where the fur connects to the body and there are extra lines, color those a light red or green.

Lastly a rarity fix, medium hair is uncommon, not rare.

Oh I was just trying something new with the stripes I don't really ever do that
also I meant basically for the chest and the butt since unless read wrong that is under rare?

Edit;
I did a tiny touch up but this is still a wip anyways. I removed the costume for now and add back later XD heheh

[SkyGold]

Oh I was just trying something new with the stripes I don't really ever do that
also I meant basically for the chest and the butt since unless read wrong that is under rare?

Edit;
I did a tiny touch up but this is still a wip anyways. I removed the costume for now and add back later XD heheh

The stripes don't look bad, it's just the slight overlap that throws off the flow a bit.

You are correct for the edits.

[KathrynKat]

Oh I was just trying something new with the stripes I don't really ever do that
also I meant basically for the chest and the butt since unless read wrong that is under rare?

Edit;
I did a tiny touch up but this is still a wip anyways. I removed the costume for now and add back later XD heheh

The stripes don't look bad, it's just the slight overlap that throws off the flow a bit.

You are correct for the edits.

the 1 line I removed which idk how even got there I think by mistake at one point maybe swiped the screen lightly with the pen has pen pressure
I've only been using it for couple of weeks and doing decent and kinda quicker and better than I was doing before. Especially on my lines :s

Edit;
I've not slept, and going to a Christmas party in few hours from now. So won't get to this until christmas Eve or something maybe even later idk depends... could be couple days before I finish Zzz