[Casperphobia]

Playing around with hair. Critique is appreciated! Timer is slightly off.

Edits:
Medium hair (uncommon)
Added fluff (rare)
Small horns (uncommon)

[snowshower3]

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[SkyGold]

I’ll help critique this entry too! It’s awesome as well, I like how you made the alternating colors along it’s back.

The little tufts on the elbows would be common since they are tufts and not a large portion of the leg being furry.

I love the design and edits so one thing I see that could be fixed is the hair. A little tatic I use myself since I don’t have pen pressure is using the eraser to sharpen any edges or lines that stick out. So on the inside of the hair where any black lines stick out, erase its corner so it becomes a point.

Then another would be as the horn attaches to the head, instead of a straight line, make it slightly bludging out if it comes below the line of the snout, if it’s on the very top of the snout, keep it straight.

Otherwise I think your designs are looking great so far!

[Casperphobia]

Thank you so much! Especially for the tip with the hair!

[KathrynKat]

I’ll help critique this entry too! It’s awesome as well, I like how you made the alternating colors along it’s back.

The little tufts on the elbows would be common since they are tufts and not a large portion of the leg being furry.

I love the design and edits so one thing I see that could be fixed is the hair. A little tatic I use myself since I don’t have pen pressure is using the eraser to sharpen any edges or lines that stick out. So on the inside of the hair where any black lines stick out, erase its corner so it becomes a point.

Then another would be as the horn attaches to the head, instead of a straight line, make it slightly bludging out if it comes below the line of the snout, if it’s on the very top of the snout, keep it straight.

Otherwise I think your designs are looking great so far!

teheheh yea I used to also do the erase the ends to make sharp points. I've been a mouse user until just couple of weeks ago. I was visiting my boyfriend, and he has...had, a bamboo wacon tablet. But I told him idk when I'll end up getting one, and asked him if I could borrow his. He said to take it because he doesn't even use it. He even sorta watched me from time to time while I was working on this
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now this is where I'm most proud of my work... and that was after I for hours of practicing for couple or few days (didn't everyday but for awhile and constant relining, with even color in that I ended up not keeping but to get an idea to know if it was what I wanted before I went hardcore.)

Psst I think be great if you got idea's and tips for me for this species?
PM to continue if u ever come across ideas for it ^_^
there is a feline version that I need to reline, and do in this color in. I've made a Canine, but I need to I think change the Feline a tiny bit.
Sorry rambles tehehe <3
just had to read more crit. If u ever find anything even in my entries that could improve lemme know
but currently my #2/#3 are a wip tehehe my #1 is done tho which u commented on :3
sorry keep rambling idk if this should only be reply in PM :s