questioning noises by yeena

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questioning noises

Postby yeena » Tue Aug 15, 2017 2:56 pm


    i think i did something wrong ?? a bit iffy but ill post them nonetheless
    im pretty sensitive to critique but feel free to offer it @ owners !!


    packing list wrote:• 1 standard silicone shell [#E7A190]
    >> ▴ folded ears [#77463F]
    >> • curly tail
    >> markings [#7B5749] [#EFD5C4]
    • filled to the brim
    >> ▴ mango smoothie [#D89C78]
    >> markings [#7B5749] [#EFD5C4]
    >> nose [#633832]
    >> paw pads [#F4AEB0]
    • 1 set of skeleton supports [#FFFFFF]
    • 1 pair of eye stickers [#BCE4FE]
    >> eyebrows [#5C3A30]
    • one packet of pink pearls [#F8ACB0]
    >> • in legs
    >> ★ mixed sizes

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Re: questioning noises

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Tue Aug 15, 2017 11:26 pm

This entry looks really cute! The only thing that looks off them is the opacity of the boba. Typically boba pearls or shaped boba from a pearl base will be set at about 95% opacity. Jellies are less opaque, though the exact opacity varies by artist(although typically I feel around 60% works), and in geometric shapes in most cases.

It seems here like you have a jelly opacity with pearl boba, but other than that, it's really cute and I can't wait to see more from you.
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Postby yeena » Tue Aug 15, 2017 11:40 pm

Weeping_Angel }Y{ wrote:This entry looks really cute! The only thing that looks off them is the opacity of the boba. Typically boba pearls or shaped boba from a pearl base will be set at about 95% opacity. Jellies are less opaque, though the exact opacity varies by artist(although typically I feel around 60% works), and in geometric shapes in most cases.

It seems here like you have a jelly opacity with pearl boba, but other than that, it's really cute and I can't wait to see more from you.


    oh oh okay; that makes a lot of sense !! i was lowering down the opacity due to it being a smoothie/more thicker in texture, but i can edit it if youd like !! otherwise thank you for the tip/explanation.
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Re: questioning noises

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Wed Aug 16, 2017 1:22 am

It may not hurt to edit it. To add that illusion of a thicker filling, many current artists will add another layer of boba behind the first that is much smaller and slightly darker. Feel free to look at my gallery for examples!
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Postby yeena » Wed Aug 16, 2017 1:37 am

Weeping_Angel }Y{ wrote:It may not hurt to edit it. To add that illusion of a thicker filling, many current artists will add another layer of boba behind the first that is much smaller and slightly darker. Feel free to look at my gallery for examples!



    alrighty, i did try your suggestion out and i think it sorta helped out here, just a bit ?? i also turned up the opacity on the filling along with the pearls.
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Re: questioning noises

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Wed Aug 16, 2017 1:42 am

That looks great!

As I said before, I'm really excited to see what else you can do with the species. Don't be afraid to try out shaping the different boba types (there's even a babusagi with shaped popping boba), and coming up with new filling types under the 'other' category. Creativity helps you out a lot in this species.
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Postby yeena » Wed Aug 16, 2017 1:49 am

Weeping_Angel }Y{ wrote:That looks great!

As I said before, I'm really excited to see what else you can do with the species. Don't be afraid to try out shaping the different boba types (there's even a babusagi with shaped popping boba), and coming up with new filling types under the 'other' category. Creativity helps you out a lot in this species.


    cool then; thank you so much for the help !! i truly appreciate it. ill definitely try to get out a couple of more entries, test out edits and all of that jazz with them; consider this babu a warmup design; it was mainly me getting adjusted to the lines and whatnot. but again, thank you and hopefully ill get a couple more entries out sometime !!
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Re: questioning noises

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Wed Aug 16, 2017 1:55 am

You're always welcome. If you have any questions, my inbox is always open as well.
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Re: questioning noises

Postby colambo » Thu Aug 17, 2017 7:05 am

wowie they look totally adorableee
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Re: questioning noises

Postby friggin' foxes » Mon Sep 04, 2017 6:50 am

I love this the stripes are A++
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they/them or she/her
(i don't really care what you refer to me as though)
baby bi bi bi.

completely awesome.

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