Kalon Entry #3 by cherrydoge

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Kalon Entry #3

Postby cherrydoge » Tue Jul 18, 2017 3:18 pm

Woo back at it again with the Kalon entries *finger guns*
A rare bab!! I was originally gonna add a Halo, but I'll do that with a different kal. I was also gonna at first do just greyscale but the red looked nice <3
Based off of smoke and dragons!!

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Second entry

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Non rarity- claw edit (? I think?)
Standard- Shine edit, Hair that stays above the jawline, teeth edit
Common- Backmane, custom tail
Uncommon- Shorter fur, custom ears, custom tongue
Rare- Horns on the head
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Re: Kalon Entry #3

Postby Kyar » Wed Jul 19, 2017 5:49 am

This is a cool idea and I really love the ear edits especially - I would say though that the body design feels a little underwhelming in this one. The red and black don't seem to me moving in quite the same way (if that makes sense) so it's throwing it off a bit for me. Also - I'd just watch where your gradient is moving on the legs because there are a few places (down by the back paws' paw pads, and around the top on each leg) the gradient isn't quite as smooth and you can see a bit of patchiness/brush strokes. I do love the shine as well though! :)
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Re: Kalon Entry #3

Postby cherrydoge » Wed Jul 19, 2017 8:26 am

Kyar wrote:This is a cool idea and I really love the ear edits especially - I would say though that the body design feels a little underwhelming in this one. The red and black don't seem to me moving in quite the same way (if that makes sense) so it's throwing it off a bit for me. Also - I'd just watch where your gradient is moving on the legs because there are a few places (down by the back paws' paw pads, and around the top on each leg) the gradient isn't quite as smooth and you can see a bit of patchiness/brush strokes. I do love the shine as well though! :)


I think I know what you mean when you say the red and black dont seem to be moving in the same way, my friend Ren said to make the red stand out more so I'll keep both things in mind when designing! Thank you!
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