[Skylion44]

Could I have some feedback?

[kiwipen]

For sure!
--- Boosts;;
The subtle green you chose for the base coat is simply perfect. I really love that shade, and I think it was a good choice.
The ear stripes you chose were also really llovely, and they were a really exciting part of your design.

--- Critiques
Per the Design Guide, you need to change the paws, eyes, nose, and tongue color to reflect the charm color you put on the collar. Otherwise, it doesn't follow the species rules
The blue markings you chose for the pelt are very hard to see, and while there's nothing wrong with pastels, I think you should have gone a shade lighter, a shade darker, or chosen perhaps a green? The green you used to color in the eyebrows might be a perfect standin

[Skylion44]

For sure!
--- Boosts;;
The subtle green you chose for the base coat is simply perfect. I really love that shade, and I think it was a good choice.
The ear stripes you chose were also really llovely, and they were a really exciting part of your design.

--- Critiques
Per the Design Guide, you need to change the paws, eyes, nose, and tongue color to reflect the charm color you put on the collar. Otherwise, it doesn't follow the species rules
The blue markings you chose for the pelt are very hard to see, and while there's nothing wrong with pastels, I think you should have gone a shade lighter, a shade darker, or chosen perhaps a green? The green you used to color in the eyebrows might be a perfect standin

fixed up the colors