[eli ayase]

this also needs to be moved but ya i did another entry!

past design

critique would b appreciated < 3

[Mima]

!!!! i love them!

my only comment is that i feel the hair on the other side of their head should maybe be a bit... fuller? thicker? more forwardy? just a little bit- like, if you could see a strand or two from the other side under their chin. otherwise, i absolutely love this entry! the way you did the hair around the ear is super cute, and the muted palette is lovely!

[eli ayase]

!!!! i love them!

my only comment is that i feel the hair on the other side of their head should maybe be a bit... fuller? thicker? more forwardy? just a little bit- like, if you could see a strand or two from the other side under their chin. otherwise, i absolutely love this entry! the way you did the hair around the ear is super cute, and the muted palette is lovely!

alrighty ill do that rn!

thank you so much < 3

[eli ayase]

fixed it!

[dox.]

i love
the spacey little marks
i love
ur entries
mmm yes

[eli ayase]

i love
the spacey little marks
i love
ur entries
mmm yes

THX DAD luv u

[Werecat]

maybe try to have more complex designs? I love your entries and all of that, and their hair is always amazing! but its usually their edits and colors that draw me to them and never really their designs.

[Shinnybear]

Moved<3

[satyn]

your entries are so smooth and lovely ;00 and you're improving so fast like what the heck ??

here are some tips!! please don't be discouraged as I really love your entries aaa
- the forehead seems to be too high - it doesn't match the curvature of the default forehead lining. I would consider shrinking it a bit?
- I personally love the simplicity of the design ,, although if you want some suggestions for more detail, perhaps add the space markings (or even stars/spots) to the back and butt? as the current space markings look more like tattoos
- another idea for the design is to use the watercolor tool to create a strip of a galaxy design on the back!
- I noticed the dark pink/red you used for the shine, and I kinda wish you used more of it!! the color palette is so cute!