Entry 1/4 by Morta

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Entry 1/4

Postby Morta » Thu Dec 29, 2016 11:02 am

Entry 1. I wanted to stick with a simple design, while using a warm palette. So here it is XD I got the design idea from a drawing I did not that long ago. Comments/critique is always welcome!
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Re: Entry 1/4

Postby kiwipen » Thu Dec 29, 2016 11:49 am

I really like your color choices for this one! The main critique is that the stripes look a little /too/ busy and aren't all that varied along the body! It makes the whole body look a bit busy. That being said, if you toned them down or put them a bit more spaced out, they'd probably look really nice. However, the colors all work really well together C:
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Re: Entry 1/4

Postby Morta » Thu Dec 29, 2016 12:22 pm

Thank you ^^ I fixed it up a bit, although I may delete a few more. When I looked at it again, it really did seem quite rushed. I'm going to add/take away a couple more things. I just want to think about what I'm going to do to it for a few moments. I don't want it to be rushed.
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Re: Entry 1/4

Postby kiwipen » Thu Dec 29, 2016 12:37 pm

Of course ! I see the edits now, and they look a lot better! The last thing (and it's a lil nitpicky) is that you forgot to color in the palette. That's about it, to be honest!
I sincerely hope that me checking in on you doesn't make you feel rushed - you are, of course, free to take your time. It was merely a check in on interest, as I have made covers and then lost interest before. C; That's all
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Re: Entry 1/4

Postby Morta » Thu Dec 29, 2016 12:45 pm

Ah, no worries. I'm quite glad that you're checking in. It shows that you care for the people that may be staff one day. And yep, Ill color in the palettes on both of them in just a moment ^^
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