Re: Entry 2

Postby qin » Tue Nov 08, 2016 11:01 am

It looks fantastic! And the shading is fine.(I'm worse... just check my gallery for proof)
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Re: Entry 2

Postby Ammy2-56 » Tue Nov 08, 2016 11:11 am

Like I said on my first entry, there's room for improvement. XD

Anyway, I think I'll draw one of the cats next. =3

Oh, and by the way, I experimented a little with his collar and decided to make it torn and have a hole in the side. I know that's not how it was in how you drew him, but I thought it might add to the "tough guy" kind of effect.
Eyes shift in myriad hue,
hollowing from the wearying
nights of unblinking watch
as innumerable miles pass
beneath a fatigued soul.

I am she; my spirit grows
thin as the gentle curtain
of eons settles over reticent
dusk, starved for the day's
rich history.

Each thread drawn to it is
plucked, a shallow fray left
in the wake of its sudden
severing. Its modest scar
on every heart and mind will
go unnoticed and forgotten.

Each of them I commit to
memory, attaching a solemn
piece of myself to the gossamer
veil of time that billows across
a ceaseless and unbroken sky.


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Ammy, or Am to old travelers I fear have moved on from this exhausted path.
You may see an odd sketch or two from me on occasion, though I have far less time
for such things now than I used to. Despite the responsibilities voraciously eating
up my days, I carry on with the stories in my head I have yet to learn how to tell.


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Re: Entry 2

Postby qin » Tue Nov 08, 2016 12:10 pm

Yeah, I noticed his collar. It looks nice actually c:
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Re: Entry 2

Postby Ammy2-56 » Tue Nov 08, 2016 12:18 pm

Thank you. ^-^

I really haven't been drawing finished pieces much recently, and this competition is kind of letting me get into the rhythm of it again. Thank you for holding it!
Eyes shift in myriad hue,
hollowing from the wearying
nights of unblinking watch
as innumerable miles pass
beneath a fatigued soul.

I am she; my spirit grows
thin as the gentle curtain
of eons settles over reticent
dusk, starved for the day's
rich history.

Each thread drawn to it is
plucked, a shallow fray left
in the wake of its sudden
severing. Its modest scar
on every heart and mind will
go unnoticed and forgotten.

Each of them I commit to
memory, attaching a solemn
piece of myself to the gossamer
veil of time that billows across
a ceaseless and unbroken sky.


x
x
Ammy, or Am to old travelers I fear have moved on from this exhausted path.
You may see an odd sketch or two from me on occasion, though I have far less time
for such things now than I used to. Despite the responsibilities voraciously eating
up my days, I carry on with the stories in my head I have yet to learn how to tell.


⊰⊱xxTTRPG Playerxx⊰⊱xxWorld Builderxx⊰⊱xxAvid Writerxx⊰⊱
x
x
x
x
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