[Chapter.Eleven]

So I left this sitting for about 20 hours as I went to bed, went to school, and did some chores. So subtract about 20 hours from the timer and thats how much time I actually spent on this.

Still a wip, of course, I need to shade the short lines and create the kid lines. And maybe add some wings, idk.

If I don't win, then I plan on keeping this lineart and using it for my own character designs n stuff.

[owl0430]

i love it, just have some tips and pointers.
1.the legs are too thin, and the back paws of them should be slightly larger then the front paws. thats how it is for lynxes.
2.the back of the hind-legs, the top part curve in too much.it should go out and 'connect' with the tail base.otherwise it looks lopsided.
3.so far the head looks great.no critism there.
4.if you dont understand what im saying add me and i can create a layer showing what i mean.

[Chapter.Eleven]

The curvey bit is more alien than lynx, I was trying to make it so it wasn't just a lynx with different eyes. Same thing with the thin legs. I can easily make the paws larger, though.

[owl0430]

, ok. the the with the back legs just makes the tail look weird in my opinion though.

[Chapter.Eleven]

Just changed a few things; and I might try something different with the tail-leg meeting spot because it is a bit weird...I think I have an idea, though.

[owl0430]

ok.cool.i agree with the tail thing.

[Chapter.Eleven]

Still WIP but yeah

[owl0430]

@can you add me to the lines?i like to see how things are.

[Chapter.Eleven]

I have added you :3

[owl0430]

looks nice.just some suggestions.
1.the base of the tail juts out too far from the body. try make more of a curved L shape.the base r the tail leans down like the vertical line of the L, then curves out like the horizontal one.
or maybe a double-lynx tail