Entry 1 by Zax

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Entry 1

Postby Zax » Wed Jul 22, 2015 5:33 am

Eyecolor: Heterochromic Blue/Brown
Phenotype: Red Merle with Irish Spotting
Genotype: kk/bb/DD/aa/EE/gg/sisi/tt/Mm/XX/ZZ

I fixed it. By fix, I mean completely redesign ;D
Last edited by Zax on Fri Jul 24, 2015 11:25 am, edited 5 times in total.
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Re: Entry 1

Postby deertush » Wed Jul 22, 2015 10:00 pm

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This is really pretty! But a few things are off if you don't mind me correcting you. You have wonderful potential, though.
Unlike horses, roaning in dogs can only show up if a white marking is present. If you look at this black roaned dog (XXX) you can see that he'd have regular maximum white. Roan does not affect the base coat(eumelanin and phaeomelanin) at all. The same goes for ticking.

Also, penciling is a marking that refers to when eumelanin partially covers the toes/feet of the dog when tan point is present.
This black masked tan point shepherd is a perfect example of penciling (XXX)

I don't mean to sound harsh or anything. ;u; I just really like what you have so far. <3
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Re: Entry 1

Postby Zax » Thu Jul 23, 2015 3:36 am

Not harsh at all! I knew I had made some mistakes I'll fix it up when I get home today and make sure I get it right. Horse genetics and dog genetics are quite different after all xD Thanks for the feedback!
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