[Toffi~]

I apply for being a Breeding artist

I would love to be part of the staff, cause this species is so adorable. I own two my self, Talys and Coya.
I would be a pleasure to me being part of your team and to grab under your arms,
so that’s why i would prefer to be just a breeding artist.

We're also in need of artist who are good with breeding pairs that are set to breed! We tend to get tons in line and Mustang can't take care of them all, neither could I.

I haven’t done any breeding before, but i absolutely want to take this challenge.
If you want me to prove, i can make a second breeding entire so i can show my skills once more.
Or you believe in me, it`s your choice.

Pair i chose to breed

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Let me Tell you what i did

1. Took Mom’s base, changed it a little in Color-transition and orientation(?)
2. Made the Back-stripes more bigger and longer, the one on the Nose too.
3. Chose an eye color that’s between the one of Mom and Dad
4. Made the Mouth-painting from Mother a little bigger
5. Took the Salbino/Splash from Father and "traced" it down with some changes
6. Foot-marking mixed out of both parent’s
Note: I did not chose the Father’s mutation, cause of a "simple" entire and Mutations need permission from WildHorse32 or MustangKnight, as i read in the species guide.


If i did something wrong, pls tell me.
This is my very first breeding.

[MustangKnight]

shading layer is turned off in this one friend

[Toffi~]

Edit X3

[KathrynKat]

I like your breeding more than I like your entry.
But I still see just minor things that could have a touch up.
The patxh is just a bit to edgy and maybe just go back an be sure it is a lil more round not jaghed and many point as there are. The father has a lil but look carefully it is limited to how much.

So just maybe small practice on the paint style to be sure it is more smooth edges not as in blended. Just look Dorain her father and you'll get an idea of what I mean.
You do have a very good taste in not to much or to little, but I'd just practice on small things such as making the patching more smooth not to jaggy.
I put all the time I could get into one nera sometimes.
For patches or stripes I like to use sizes 2-5 and use it most of the time except when making the patch then I would use large then start just rounding things out. The patxh I would say maybe slightly bigger but your choice. I would just focus on making it a better shape than it is.

[Toffi~]

redid it a little... ._.

[KathrynKat]

much better