- ✦ │ First Entry │✦ - by demonthief.

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- ✦ │ First Entry │✦ -

Postby demonthief. » Tue Jun 02, 2015 7:36 pm

    First entry based on a bird, this one in particular (a Brown Scrub-Robin)
    I am quite proud of the eyes.
    Do the eye colours have to be natural? If so I can easily change them.
    I hope you like it!
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Re: - ✦ │ First Entry │✦ -

Postby ShadyBro » Sat Jun 06, 2015 4:47 pm

This is a fabulous first entry. The lines are a bit too pale however. The eyes are beautiful, and thats one of the things I personally look for in any design. I love the blending word and subtly of the colors. The white and dark brown marks in the feathers seem a tad out of place, and the inner ears could use some attention.

Thats about all I got ^^ (No need to change it, btw, Ill look for the improvement in your next entry based on what Iv told you here.)
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