[tooby]

Finished! I'll color it in to show each edit thing for you.

[jaques]

OMG this is so good!
You're so probably going to win tbh ;u;

My only suggestion is to change up the feet a bit, I have some friends who help me with critiquing stuff and we all agree that this is so A+ but the feet are a turn off OvO

I look forward to you finishing this though. So excited.

[tooby]

Thank you!!!
feet makover: COMMENCE

[jaques]

Ah amazing. Are all the individual edits on the main lines?

And, one more thing, may I be added to check around with the line work, I most be posting anything, just getting familiarized with the species.

[tooby]

Ah amazing. Are all the individual edits on the main lines?

And, one more thing, may I be added to check around with the line work, I most be posting anything, just getting familiarized with the species.

All the edits and their colors have separate layers. I'll add you in a sec

[jaques]

OK. I've played with the lines some and I need yo suggest one thing ;3;
You might need to added the extra trains for the baby lines, too.
I know it seems like A LOT, but when we do a nursery and those edits aren't there, it might be hard. It's up to you to do that though.
The outcomes can probably develop later on once they grow.

[jaques]

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