[RowanRaccoon]

I really liked this species idea! I changed it up a little bit by adding spinal bones and tail.
The layers are made so that the color of the bones and body color are separate.

[KathrynKat]

As a First Entry this is better than I expected to see!

Positive
The Skull is great, I love what you've added
The Ears are better than I could do.
Love that you came out with the idea of the spine popping out through out the neck and back.

Negative
If you did the tail maybe fur and bones it... then maybe the fluff at the end. To many species have it, and it's not to possible when it's only bone then fur, if you get what I mean? If you maybe tried something like, I guess a little with the spine sticking out from the back, on the tail. The Hooves came out a bit big, best off smaller. The Neck is not thick enough, and I was more hoping on a neck that's rather thick, and yet fluffy!( I guess almost like a Llama or Buffalo kind of fluff) The Left Legs are okay, but the Right need just a bit of work. But the fur on the Left Legs is probably better than I could do here on CS, The program is harder for me to understand than the tools of DA.

Pointers
- Neck to Thin
- Hooves to big
- Tail to unrealistic (I really mostly prefer the tail I have originally)
- No lump on the back (I understand if you meant for it to be the shoulders but to far back)
- The Fur doesn't looks as soft, thick, and fluffy as I had hoped.)

I hope it's alright that I gave out some little pointers to you?
I'll be sending you a gift now for entering, because I can tell you put allot of effort into this, but also wanted to let to know I'm still going to hold this contest, but do not want you to wait... But you are free to try again but a gift will not be given again, and only a chance at placing!!!
Thank you a ton for entering, and happy that you love the species, I really hope to see you stick around for the adoptable's when they come out :3
I really hope you don't take this the wrong way, but still thank you, but as I said in rules each user that enters, and I can tell they put effort, I'll still reward them <3

[RowanRaccoon]

As a First Entry this is better than I expected to see!

Positive
The Skull is great, I love what you've added
The Ears are better than I could do.
Love that you came out with the idea of the spine popping out through out the neck and back.

Negative
If you did the tail maybe fur and bones it... then maybe the fluff at the end. To many species have it, and it's not to possible when it's only bone then fur, if you get what I mean? If you maybe tried something like, I guess a little with the spine sticking out from the back, on the tail. The Hooves came out a bit big, best off smaller. The Neck is not thick enough, and I was more hoping on a neck that's rather thick, and yet fluffy!( I guess almost like a Llama or Buffalo kind of fluff) The Left Legs are okay, but the Right need just a bit of work. But the fur on the Left Legs is probably better than I could do here on CS, The program is harder for me to understand than the tools of DA.

Pointers
- Neck to Thin
- Hooves to big
- Tail to unrealistic (I really mostly prefer the tail I have originally)
- No lump on the back (I understand if you meant for it to be the shoulders but to far back)
- The Fur doesn't looks as soft, thick, and fluffy as I had hoped.)

I hope it's alright that I gave out some little pointers to you?
I'll be sending you a gift now for entering, because I can tell you put allot of effort into this, but also wanted to let to know I'm still going to hold this contest, but do not want you to wait... But you are free to try again but a gift will not be given again, and only a chance at placing!!!
Thank you a ton for entering, and happy that you love the species, I really hope to see you stick around for the adoptable's when they come out :3
I really hope you don't take this the wrong way, but still thank you, but as I said in rules each user that enters, and I can tell they put effort, I'll still reward them <3

Oh no it's fine I just do competitions for fun usually so I'm glad to get some pointers. Thank you for the gift and suggestions!

[KathrynKat]

Oh by the way, if you like... check out the new sketch on the main page

[RowanRaccoon]

Oh by the way, if you like... check out the new sketch on the main page

Sure c: