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first as an artist. Hope everyone likes it!

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best story that i read wins!

[widowed]

this is really pretty for a first try, I might try out (:

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this is really pretty for a first try, I might try out (:

thanks. I usually go with the chocolate or rainbow designs XD
i think of a design while making it.

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You can't have a RAINBOW
without a little RAIN.

Username;; pinkie.
Gender;; female.
Name;; Rainbow
Story;;
Rainbow was only a kit when her parents died from terrible scientist hunters, who wanted to learn more about creatures just like them. She knew to hide away from people who came in the forest, because she figured they were up to no good. Rainbow was special, which meant she had to try harder to hide from them. She was a rare creature, there wasn't any other kitty like her. Of course, as young kits start out, Rainbow didn't have wings. It was hard for her because she was on her own, with no one to protect her, and worst of all, she was special so she stood out in the crowd. There weren't any food around that she would eat, so her parents had to go to a far away place to get her food she actually would eat and now she doesn't have anyone to help her. She has to learn to do it on her own.

One random day Rainbow was carefully watching everything that surrounded her for those terrible hunters. She didn't see anything but grass, bushes, and trees so she assumed no one was around, and they would be here at night since that's when the kits were sleeping. Rainbow ran along the forest, happy as could be and then all of a sudden she heard a quick shifting sound in the bushed. Her eyes opened wide and she flew behind another bush, scared. She poked her head out to find everything silent and still. All of a sudden she felt a quick pain in her leg, and she fell to the ground.

Moments later, she woke up in a very pretty field, full of bright green grass and very many colourful tulips and daisies. She wasn't expecting to end up her, she was suspecting someone shot her with a dart and sent her to the place where all those mean guys come from. She stood up, feeling strong and refreshed, and even a bit taller. She turned around and felt something soft and gentle hit her face. She looked on her back to find small wings forming. She felt excitement and ran all around in the field. A couple of days later her wings fully grew into adult wings, and Rainbow flew off into the sky with all of her other kitty friends.

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I really like your story Pinkie!
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[widowed]

I really like your story Pinkie!
Bump

thanks ovo

[PhoenixNyxia]

Usename: PhoenixNyxia
Gender: Male
Name: Rayne Beau
Story:

Rayne Beau lived in the forest listening about stories involving sky rainbows and little pots of gold. He wondered one day if this was a true thing. So after a nice warm summer rain he ventured outside. In the sky was a rainbow. He smiled to himself as he decided this would be the best time to find out if the stories were true. He took to the sky and began to follow the rainbow. He saw birds flying and waved a paw at them.

Rayne Beau could see something not to far off and it gleamed. He tilted his head as he finished his flight. There in the meadow, at the end of the rainbow was a pot of gold. He was so happy that he asked the little man beside it to let him have some.

"What would you do with the gold?" asked the little man. He had heard so many stories of greed and was ready to hear another one.

Rayne Beau thought for a moment and then smiled a very sweet smile. Looking at the little man he said in a sweet and meaningful voice. "I would make sure no one ever reaches the end of the rainbow again and I would buy things for those who can't afford them." He knew the little man may say no and waited for the reply. To his shock the little man reached into the pot and gave Rayne Beau three gold pieces.

"Keep your word and you may be richer than you have ever dreamed," the little man said kindly and disappeared. Before the rainbow could fully disappear Rayne Beau made his way to his home. He kept his word helping those he could to get food and other needed items. He did become rich indeed. The wealth was not of money but of friends.

[DreamShine]

Username~ DreamShine
Gender ~Female
Name~ KristalWings

Story:
KristalWings was the only kit that didn't seem to fit in. Since she was a kit, her parents knew that she would be different from the others. At first no one suspected anything about her. Then as she grew up into a tiny kitten, they realized she had great powers. Her creative mind was always churning and coming up with great ideas. But that's not why she was different. She had a great magic in her, that brought color, life, and happiness to others. Her tail could create beautiful and colorful murals with one flick, and her tiny wings were so bright, that even before they were full grown they attracted rainbows and color to them, making them be more colorful and beautiful.

At first others were thrilled that she had such great powers. But soon others became envious of her power and beauty and all the attention she got from the adult and higher class cats. KristalWings was every thing they wanted to be; smart, pretty, creative, and funny. They were tired of her constantly being happy and nice to others. They became bitter and jealous.

One day small group of kits were sitting together, and they got around to talking about KristalWings. They murmured about her and whispered secretly with each other. They wanted to find a way to take away KristalWings power, so she would stop getting all the attention and become like one of them. They came up with many solutions, but they settled on stating rumors about her to lower her self-esteem. Once the rumors started they spread like wild fire. Some said that she was "stealing power from the higher class adults" and that she "probably colors her wings to make them bright, they weren't real." These comments and many more did what the other kits hoped: they made her nervous and wary about what others thought of her.

"Are my wings really that bright?" she wondered. Becoming desperate, she decided to use black fur dye on her wings to dull them. The first time she tried dying them, it washed of easily afterwards. Becoming more confident, she dulled her little wings every day so kits wouldn't notice them. She also stopped using her "easy art" powers and reverted to doing it with her paws like other kits did. Eventually since she kept doing all this, the rumors died down.

This went on for years. When she finally grew up and her wings were fully grown, she was excited for "Departure Day", or the day that the Kits of a certain age, leave the earth floor and join the other adult cats in the sky. The hours before the they were suppose to meet, KristalWings scrubbed and scrubbed her wings, trying to get the dye off. She then realized in horror that her wings were permanently stained a dull color. She wept sadly at the thought of never seeing her beautiful and colorful wings again. Her powers were also lost from years of disuse, and she had forgotten how to use them and control them. She sighed ad sat down sadly, tears running down her cheeks. She glanced into the water and smiled at her reflection. Even though she may not be beautiful on the outside, she realized that she was wonderful, colorful, and beautiful on the inside. She could still make people happy by just being herself and smiling at them, keeping them company. She smiled and stood, and said to herself "I am KristalWings of the Flying Star Kitty tribe! No one can force me to be something I don't want to be! I am beautiful on the inside and that is all that matters!"