Entry #1 by AustrianAce

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Postby AustrianAce » Mon Dec 16, 2013 10:29 am

My first entry for the Docksen Artist Competition <3
Isn't he beautiful?
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Re: Entry #1

Postby Oddly Shaded » Mon Dec 16, 2013 10:48 am

I really love the texturing you have, but with the dapples/spots try not to over lap them. It is much more effective when you don't overlap.

With the base highlights - the main ones (not the line one) is really not all that visible. So maybe brighten it up a little and play around with them to see what makes the design pop.

May edit with more - Also, Razzle is going to give you some feedback too :)
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Re: Entry #1

Postby AustrianAce » Mon Dec 16, 2013 10:55 am

I played around a bit, is that better?
Thank you very much for the feedback! <3
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Re: Entry #1

Postby Oddly Shaded » Mon Dec 16, 2013 7:52 pm

Also, If you could remove the background on your entry. This is so we can see the 'not a real docksen'.
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