[Flawless.]

Hope u like it

[Cronchlord]

Im sorry but do you think you could make her alot more creative? and about the backs story were is it?

[Flawless.]

It was summer afternoon when 3 pups were outside with their mother. Then at night the 3 puppies disappeared. The mother and father were really sad. One day the mother woke up there were her two puppies! But what about the third 1. They were looking for her but did not find her.

One night a robber came, he took the puppies away before. The parents woke up and bit him so he would not run because they bit him in the leg. The robber told them were the 3 puppy is hidden. But she was not there.They never saw her again.






It is a short story.

[Cronchlord]

ok