3rd entery- water by Coexist

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3rd entery- water

Postby Coexist » Fri Oct 12, 2012 7:32 am

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Have you been a guest artist before? yes just not here
If yes, where? viewtopic.php?t=1327631 Tiny elephants (GA),
viewtopic.php?t=1351258 Hover Foxes (GA), viewtopic.php?t=1212435 Demon Dog (Artist), more but wont bore you.
What common coat colors did you use? blue, lt blue
What pattern did you use? spots (dabs)
Are you serious about being a guest artist? yes
Do you understand the difference between dominant/recessive genes? yes but might need a refresser
Why you want to be a guest artist for RotR? love these guys, wanted to help out before but couldnt understand the program.. here I can and am willing to work hard and study to do so.
I would like to appoligize to everyone for my behavior. Apparently one of my meds needed adjusted. I decided to stay but I will soon start a thread about High Functioning Autisum so that maybe a few people can better understand when I do slip. Love you all!
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Re: 3rd entery- water

Postby rainbowpanda101 » Fri Oct 12, 2012 9:04 am

Very good. I just have a few things to note.

What you call "spots" are too big and would actually be classified as patches. This is more what I think of when I say spots. Also, this has absolutely no markings whatsoever. You've got a pattern (the patches) but no markings. Because of that, it comes off as a little plain and (I hate to say) boring.

Are you capable of doing markings and patterns more detailed than what you've shown? I noticed the stripes on your first entry were big and bulky, and your patches on this one are rather big and bulky as well. I suggest editing either your first entry by giving it thinner, more delicate stripes or edit this entry by adding some markings (something on the face/ears/chest/tail...maybe in white?) and making the patches look more like deformed ovals than circles. Or you can edit both entries, if you wish. It's up to you. (Also, I've noticed on all of your entries that you've made the eyes completely black with no iris whatsoever. They don't have traditional pupils, so if you want to edit your entries you can erase the pupils you gave them.)

I hope you don't take these little criticisms personally. I'm just testing you to see if you're capable of creating what I'm looking for. Thanks again for entering!
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Re: 3rd entery- water

Postby Coexist » Fri Oct 12, 2012 6:53 pm

No critic is my friend. The above is what I first wanted to do with this, but I know that it is not under your patterns or anything else for that matter.. I had also used stripe earlier and didnt know if this qualified as such. I know my designs are plain compaired to yours but... Im not used to making designs like yours.
I would like to appoligize to everyone for my behavior. Apparently one of my meds needed adjusted. I decided to stay but I will soon start a thread about High Functioning Autisum so that maybe a few people can better understand when I do slip. Love you all!
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