[cocoa]

Hmm...it still could be a bit less sloppy. The gold line-marks and the brown line dots could be a bit less sloppy, like more blended in with the coat. If you can do that, it would probably be perfect. [As in the gold marks on the tail and the gold marks ringing around the back leg, and as in the massive brown lines by the chest.]

[fallinglikeastar]

Dawg, your skills are boss!

[Asa Willow]

K I'll try my best to make it good :3

edit: k done :3

[fallinglikeastar]

Aw, I liked it a lot better bolder, since the the colour of the coat varies a lot even without the dark and gold markings, but that's just me, and obviously my opinion isn't the one that matters lol. I thought the gold went super well. ^^

[cocoa]

No, I think it's pretty good now. ^^