[troblsomtwins829]

Hello :3

[Wanheda.]

eia

[troblsomtwins829]

:3

[Wanheda.]

how is you? trying to find a dark poem for school...can you help?

[troblsomtwins829]

Oh WOW!!! XDXD I just wrote one on TinierMe yesterday

here's the poem:



Dear Natalie

Natalie,
Since you left;
The sky's been grey,
With regret.

Dear Natalie,
Why did you leave?
Was it something I did or said,
That made you go away?

My dear Natalie,
When you left, my heart broke;
Into a million pieces,
Never to be whole again.

My dearest Natalie,
I miss your smiling face;
You were the thorns of my flower,
Not a thing can take your place.

My sweet Natalie,
All I have left;
Are the memories we shared,
I know to move on;
But I shan't dare.

My sweet, sweet Natalie,
The rope still hangs;
From when you did your deed,
From it, your warmth never leaves.

You are a fairytale Maiden,
And I, your Knight;
Who failed to give you a happy ending.

My dear, sweet Natalie,
I come by everyday;
To visit your grave,
If only to see your smile again.

-Gigi Amos
Ribbon Studio




what do you think? will it work?

[Wanheda.]

(claps) yes it would but if i read it everyone would think im lez because there a natalie in my class XD

[wildfire6]

This I will enjoy...

[troblsomtwins829]

XDXD relax, just tell them I wrote it and this Natalie is a fictional persona I made as a base for the poem, since it's about a guy who lost the only light of his life simple, yes?

btw, i'm fine XD great actually! in comparison to yesterday -_-U

[Wanheda.]

so far im with this
Insanity

This pain inside
It drives me wild
It makes me scream
Just like a child

I wish that I
Could soothe the pain
Make it leave
And keep me sane

It doesnt work
Im left to deal
All this pain
Does my body fill

My mind now lost
I see just pain
My mind is gone
I am insane

[troblsomtwins829]

Hmmm.... gimme a sec, finishing up cleaning my stupid room >:(