[Troy_Hancock]

Do you like it? They're twins!

*Edit*

[Equid Phantasm]

Please read my rules, you've missed something important. Also, if you look at the entries, you will see that there has already been an entry that is very very much like this in brown and pink, so maybe you should change something about it somehow.

Equid

[Equid Phantasm]

Hello. Sorry for the late reply, and I'll be judging in a moment. I did have yours critiqued already once but it became the victim of the Friday data loss. This is the first time I've had a moment since then to actually do the critiques.

It's a nice artwork. The concept of twins never crossed my mind when I was doing the 2 wolves/dogs. I was looking for markings and whether people realized there are different markings on each side. I like how your markings are simple and add to the work. I areally like the tree background how the tree just fades into it but what is distracting to me is the eyes, they are a different color than the wolves and should have matched them.

I am giving tips on all so here's your tips.

1. Your markings on the face versus the body shot on the right side wolf do not match. On the face you are showing the x marking on the cheek but on the body it is above the eye, not on the cheek.

2. Overspray. On the same wolf, the blue spray is not erased above the animal, it draws the eye to that spot. On the same note, the left side wolf's spray paint goes up the neck whereas on the head shot you didn't do any neck spray.

I'm off to the judging after I finish up the next 4 critiques that all got lost on Friday.

Equid

[Troy_Hancock]

Alright, Thank you for the tips!

[Equid Phantasm]

You're welcome, sorry you didn't make the prizes, but your score is posted below all the winning scores, I gave a score and reasoning for every ones artworks.

Equid

P.S. I am having another of these contests probably I'll say October.. All non-winning entries and honorable mentions will be allowed to enter.

EP