1-
-Fore head, eyes, and Snout-
The dog needs a bit more forehead than that, and the snout should be thinner and shorter. The bottom of the snout curves and does not go on a direct angle, more rounded than pointed. The dog almost had no forehead, throwings his eyes placement, way off. The Eyes should go in between the end of the forehead and the beginning of the snout. as shown in the picture :)
2-
-Cheek bone hair(as i call it :s)-
If your doing lined art, the fur on the cheek should go under the ear, and not at the bottom of the head. Of course i have seen a lot of great artists do as you did :)
3-
-Ears-
Those things, the things that make you hear, they always throw me off. The should be smaller and more rounded. Note how i make the cheek hair connect to the ear, weird but makes a small amount of sense right?
4-
-Neck-
Both top Bottom of the neck should be fluffy, and the Dog/Wolfs chest should be lower.
5-
-Front legs-
They should be separated more, the way you had it made it look as if both legs were right next to each other (|| like that far apart o.o) and if that were to happen our poor lil doggie would fall right onto his side. Also, the shoulders should be more by the ribs of the wolf, rather than the chest.
6-
-Back Legs-
Those also should be separated a bit more as well, and the leg anatomy was a bit off. Though its an easy fix once you correct it enough :)
7-
-The back-
Evil thing isnt it?
Well it should be more rounded than flat, all spines have a curve of some sort, and a flat spine would be very uncomfortable doncha think?
8-
-TheTail-
Everyone loves Bushy Tails.
Making it Fluffy and not flat would indeed improve your art.
9-
-The stomach-
Well i see this a lot. So dont worry.
You made him awfully skinny, i gave him a hamburger so he could gain some weight. Sorry OnO
Well a lot of people do this. Its also an easy fix once you get used to it C:
-Fore head, eyes, and Snout-
The dog needs a bit more forehead than that, and the snout should be thinner and shorter. The bottom of the snout curves and does not go on a direct angle, more rounded than pointed. The dog almost had no forehead, throwings his eyes placement, way off. The Eyes should go in between the end of the forehead and the beginning of the snout. as shown in the picture :)
2-
-Cheek bone hair(as i call it :s)-
If your doing lined art, the fur on the cheek should go under the ear, and not at the bottom of the head. Of course i have seen a lot of great artists do as you did :)
3-
-Ears-
Those things, the things that make you hear, they always throw me off. The should be smaller and more rounded. Note how i make the cheek hair connect to the ear, weird but makes a small amount of sense right?
4-
-Neck-
Both top Bottom of the neck should be fluffy, and the Dog/Wolfs chest should be lower.
5-
-Front legs-
They should be separated more, the way you had it made it look as if both legs were right next to each other (|| like that far apart o.o) and if that were to happen our poor lil doggie would fall right onto his side. Also, the shoulders should be more by the ribs of the wolf, rather than the chest.
6-
-Back Legs-
Those also should be separated a bit more as well, and the leg anatomy was a bit off. Though its an easy fix once you correct it enough :)
7-
-The back-
Evil thing isnt it?
Well it should be more rounded than flat, all spines have a curve of some sort, and a flat spine would be very uncomfortable doncha think?
8-
-TheTail-
Everyone loves Bushy Tails.
Making it Fluffy and not flat would indeed improve your art.
9-
-The stomach-
Well i see this a lot. So dont worry.
You made him awfully skinny, i gave him a hamburger so he could gain some weight. Sorry OnO
Well a lot of people do this. Its also an easy fix once you get used to it C:
