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Creature Redline by geinkotsu

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Creature Redline

Postby geinkotsu » Tue Nov 20, 2012 5:16 am

The most common thing I see with anatomy in creatures is when you get too loose with your curves. While curves are great, they aren't great for everything. Most what I fixed was this looseness. Stiffening up the anatomy some more and playing around with the proportions.

I made the head ideally smaller, and dug out the muscles more on the body. I felt the creature needed a more bulky appearance to befit some of it's features {like those jaws and his horns for instance}.
Everything else is a matter of detail and willingness to define what it is. Such as how the hair on the tail sits, how textured something is, etc etc.


I hope this is useful for you. If you really like it, I can turn it into a set of lines for you with alpha lock colors and such.
It is your creature after all, I just improvised it a little.


Original Sketch/Concept (c) ᴍʏᴛʜ + ᴅᴇsᴛɪɴʏ
Redline/Improvisions (c) Geinkotsu
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Re: Creature Redline

Postby myth; » Tue Nov 20, 2012 5:20 am

Wow, this looks great OuO
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Re: Creature Redline

Postby geinkotsu » Tue Nov 20, 2012 5:24 am

Thank you! Did you want me to add your name or anything so you can use it???
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Re: Creature Redline

Postby myth; » Tue Nov 20, 2012 5:28 am

Yes please ^-^
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Re: Creature Redline

Postby geinkotsu » Tue Nov 20, 2012 5:29 am

I added your name- of course, my offer to line this for you still stands.
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