[geinkotsu]

"All I can see through this thick fog is
the trail of red hair leading me on like a ribbon
dangling in my face. I have only known these people
for days, yet this man feels so familiar."

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So I spent a good amount of time on this... Apparently this is lazy to me. Oh I'll make it lazy and save myself the trouble, not. I hope you enjoy the pretty graphics~ Might be a little slow to unravel the plot in the prologue pages because I cannot write small without sacrificing legibility.

Comments and critique always appreciated~ <3

[Syla Delaney]

Gein..... this is beautiful and awesome so far....
8T
I'm like... really excited.

[geinkotsu]

Fffff thankyou so much~ Within the next few pages will be the explanation of the mist and yada yada <3 I hope you find it interesting ;D

[Keero]

I'm loving this comic style already. <3
I can't wait to see more of it! C:

[geinkotsu]

Thankyou! ;u; I'm so glad that I already have two people following my comic so early in. I hope to work on the next page soon~ And I am glad you love the style I am drawing this in! I am not sure where it came from but... I love it as well!

[33Kitty]

Well now, you have three~
I love it, and will be sure to check back often.^^ You can't possibly be any more lazy than one of my favorite authors, and I'm a patient person, so I think this will work out okay.

[geinkotsu]

Ffff thankyou so much ;u; Hopefully I can get another page up soon. I'm trying to cram a lot into the prologue lol.

[Shiko Hayashi]

The ribbon is very well done. Maybe add a bit more shadow, just too make the twists and folds appear more apparent.
Maybe give the character's edges more definition? A light, almost barely visible lining? If not, then I would suggest thickening the shadows. to give a more in depth, detail appearance.
Although simple, I like the background. It almost gives a slightly ephemeral feel to the character's voice.

Otherwise, nicely done! I look forward to the next page Gein!

[geinkotsu]

Ah, thankyou so much~! ;u; <3 And yeah I know there isn't that much detail in it overall, but it was kind of meant to be that way? I'm thinking of detailing it a little more in the actual chapter. I'm working on the next page fff sorry I am so slow.