by Thuban » Fri Jul 13, 2012 8:27 am
Your lines dont really look all that bad, the front legs are what stands out to me as needing the most work. Are you intending to sprite that? (if so, i have free time and am better at spriting than drawing)
If you want it poked, i can give it a shot, if you want it sprited (at least lines, coloring is still a bit rough for me due to colorblindness) then i can do that.