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Need redlines

Postby kavlri » Mon Jan 30, 2012 10:52 pm

As the title said, I would appreciate some redlines for this wolf sketch. The anatomy isn't correct for sure, I still need a lot of practice. If you're not redlining, constructive critism are fine too.

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Re: Need redlines

Postby Kabber » Tue Jan 31, 2012 2:54 pm

What are you talking about? It looks great!

































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Re: Need redlines

Postby BayloneRose » Tue Jan 31, 2012 4:24 pm

it does look really good!!
all i see that needs work is the chest and head
i could red line those areas if u want. it'd only take a sec
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Re: Need redlines

Postby kavlri » Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:52 pm

BayloneRose wrote:it does look really good!!
all i see that needs work is the chest and head
i could red line those areas if u want. it'd only take a sec

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Re: Need redlines

Postby Get Me A Turtle » Wed Feb 01, 2012 6:42 pm

I'm surprised you're asking for redlines on this, it looks great! All I would say is the ears, make them a tad, just a tad, bigger and rounder. And since it looks relaxed, relax the tail too, maybe thin it out? Obviously that's a personal preference, with different wolf breeds and season coat thickness and whatnot.
Really nice lines, though!
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